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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | A naked boulevardian | lavadis | 2 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Just Put Me In The Fridge | airyfairy | 22 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Dundee | sean mcnulty | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Release | Bucky | 1 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point | Insertponceyfre... | 1 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Dwayne Delivers Again - A Craven Danger Mystery | hudsonmoon | 8 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | It could be worse | camilla | 11 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The Bountiful | celticman | 20 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Wish You Were Here | luigi_pagano | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Come and Join the Fun... | Ewan | 10 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | He Knew | Richard L. Prov... | 7 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | If You Were A Comet | onemorething | 2 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Happy Mother's Day | Jane Hyphen | 14 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | 36. Ride of the Valkyries | Ewan | 2 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | On Our Way - Video | hudsonmoon | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Gloria | Amavisti | 8 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Song to the self | Parson Thru | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | What is in a Name? | scottxxoo | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | Self First Self Last | forest_for_ever | 4 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | The cell | monodemo | 1 | 5 years 2 months ago |
| Story | dolly heaven | celticman | 6 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Vengeance is My Middle Name - A Craven Danger Mystery | hudsonmoon | 10 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | To wait | onemorething | 9 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Puddle of land | celticman | 18 | 5 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Reading | Amavisti | 4 | 5 years 3 months ago |
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Travis's Tours
Travis's Tours !supportEmptyParas]> Four days have passed, one after another, like lettuce leaves being scraped against a grater. If what I feel...
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Penguin Ending
Penguin Ending !supportEmptyParas]> !supportEmptyParas]> It is the last day of the holiday and I wake with a start. Above my head the roof...
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After After The Quake
After After the Quake On Boxing Day Ralph woke with the worst possible hangover. The night before he had drunk until three am in a bar on Oxford...
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Diary November 2nd
Diary November 2 - on finishing editing Darts and watching Fahrenheit 451
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Bit strange is perfect for me
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
Bit strange is perfect for me. And I like that your poems have a specific style - they are very you, your voice - good I think when you are putting a collection together.
Read full commentPosted in Underground
I love this one too. To
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
I love this one too. To describe a person as a mole is unusual but fits perfectly and then you carry it on through the whole poem. And what you say is true - if we burrow ourselves our reality does become distorted, and memories invade...
Read full commentPosted in Underground
Catullus for me was a 30(+)
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
Catullus for me was a 30(+) year flashback.... You did Latin at uni? I only went to O level. I don't think there was an option to go further.
Read full commentPosted in The Provinces of Sea Swallows
This reminded me of Catullus,
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
This reminded me of Catullus, a personal nature poem speaking to another. Loved it.
Drew
Read full commentPosted in The Provinces of Sea Swallows
The writing is great and it's
Posted on Mon, 20 Jan 2020
The writing is great and it's full of ideas. But you've got too many ideas for the story, that aren't about the story. I think, in my opinion, the 1st part prior to the detonation is too long - because it doesn't balance with this section. Which...
Read full commentPosted in The Free Market (Part 2)
This is brilliant again, the
Posted on Sun, 19 Jan 2020
This is brilliant again, the pairing of similar words and how this carries on to a range of perspectives. And 'formic' - I love that. Never heard it before but close enough to the French and the context to guess its meaning.
Drew
Read full commentPosted in Anthill
Stunning. Drew.
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020
Stunning.
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Posted in Lime Tree
I like the absurd humour of
Posted on Thu, 09 Jan 2020
I like the absurd humour of it.
The computer wears tennis shoes. And the dialogue over Mel Brooks is good.
It's just my opinion but I'd think of a plot for it, rather than taken to another planet, clean some gutters, come...
Read full commentPosted in Salamander 7
A tasty after-dinner treat.
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2020
A tasty after-dinner treat. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in To the belly of an osprey
Thanks. Although still
Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2019
Thanks. Although still writing I'd been feeling down and very self critical about everything I was doing. This last few months posting stuff on here and getting nice comments has given me a huge boost. I've finished Flamingo Hotel and have...
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