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| Story | Just Put Me In The Fridge | airyfairy | 22 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Dundee | sean mcnulty | 4 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Release | Bucky | 1 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Blog entry | Story and Poem of the Week and Inspiration Point | insertponceyfre... | 1 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Dwayne Delivers Again - A Craven Danger Mystery | hudsonmoon | 8 | 6 years 3 months ago |
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| Story | The Bountiful | celticman | 20 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Wish You Were Here | luigi_pagano | 4 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Come and Join the Fun... | Ewan | 10 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | He Knew | Richard L. Prov... | 7 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | If You Were A Comet | onemorething | 2 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Happy Mother's Day | Jane Hyphen | 14 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | 36. Ride of the Valkyries | Ewan | 2 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | On Our Way - Video | hudsonmoon | 4 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Gloria | Amavisti | 8 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | What is in a Name? | scottxxoo | 4 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Self First Self Last | forest_for_ever | 4 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | The cell | monodemo | 1 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | dolly heaven | celticman | 6 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Vengeance is My Middle Name - A Craven Danger Mystery | hudsonmoon | 10 | 6 years 3 months ago |
| Story | To wait | onemorething | 9 | 6 years 3 months ago |
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Intimacy
"But why me? I asked. I was sitting at the desk on the opposite side of The Captain. The Captain was a large corpulent man given to sudden bouts of anger. The other officers said it was best to butter him up, but I had always found him very fair, without having to slip into unfeigned sycophancy.
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City Scapes
?People up there think you?re a myth,? I say. "Oh, you don?t want to believe everything you hear," says Dillon
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Elephant in Street
Elephant in Street !supportEmptyParas]> There's an elephant In the street Like a taxi that's Taken a wrong turn. !supportEmptyParas]> I reach...
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Patpong Market
Patpong Market !supportEmptyParas]> The ladyboy selling sunglasses Smiles at us when we stop at Her stall. !supportEmptyParas]> "1000 baht,"...
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Hotel In Bangkok
Hotel In Bangkok !supportEmptyParas]> The drunk Americans from the bar Stand with us at the bank of lifts. "We'll take the empty one," One says,...
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I love this one too. To
Posted on Mon, 27 Jan 2020
I love this one too. To describe a person as a mole is unusual but fits perfectly and then you carry it on through the whole poem. And what you say is true - if we burrow ourselves our reality does become distorted, and memories invade...
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Catullus for me was a 30(+)
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
Catullus for me was a 30(+) year flashback.... You did Latin at uni? I only went to O level. I don't think there was an option to go further.
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This reminded me of Catullus,
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2020
This reminded me of Catullus, a personal nature poem speaking to another. Loved it.
Drew
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The writing is great and it's
Posted on Mon, 20 Jan 2020
The writing is great and it's full of ideas. But you've got too many ideas for the story, that aren't about the story. I think, in my opinion, the 1st part prior to the detonation is too long - because it doesn't balance with this section. Which...
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This is brilliant again, the
Posted on Sun, 19 Jan 2020
This is brilliant again, the pairing of similar words and how this carries on to a range of perspectives. And 'formic' - I love that. Never heard it before but close enough to the French and the context to guess its meaning.
Drew
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Stunning. Drew.
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2020
Stunning.
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Posted in Lime Tree
I like the absurd humour of
Posted on Thu, 09 Jan 2020
I like the absurd humour of it.
The computer wears tennis shoes. And the dialogue over Mel Brooks is good.
It's just my opinion but I'd think of a plot for it, rather than taken to another planet, clean some gutters, come...
Read full commentPosted in Salamander 7
A tasty after-dinner treat.
Posted on Sat, 04 Jan 2020
A tasty after-dinner treat. Thank you.
Read full commentPosted in To the belly of an osprey
Thanks. Although still
Posted on Tue, 24 Dec 2019
Thanks. Although still writing I'd been feeling down and very self critical about everything I was doing. This last few months posting stuff on here and getting nice comments has given me a huge boost. I've finished Flamingo Hotel and have...
Read full commentPosted in MovieLand! (A Christmas Story. Part 1)
Love this. You pierce the
Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019
Love this. You pierce the shape perfectly.
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