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My stories

C Darts ch27

Darts with the brothers

S 249 words

The end of the first part of the tales 249 words in length about a boy 249 mm high.

R 249 words

The Party

Q 249 words

Going to the hospital

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Ninny's news

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297 of my comments have received 317 Great Feedback votes

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Love this. You pierce the

Posted on Sat, 28 Dec 2019

Love this. You pierce the shape perfectly. 

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Posted in Decagon

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But don't expect them to buy

Posted on Mon, 16 Dec 2019

But don't expect them to buy you a beer. They might buy the brewery via an offshore company and put up the price selling it as artisan. 

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Posted in Knowing when it's all up

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Both Angel, and myself, are

Posted on Thu, 12 Dec 2019

Both Angel, and myself, are in need of a morning after pill. 

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Posted in Angel 78 (old friends and new)

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The story's all there but I

Posted on Fri, 06 Dec 2019

The story's all there but I think the twist is too much of a twist. I'd get Charlie in right in the first line. 'Alfred could love or leave his family but Charlie was his mate...' or something like that. And I'd give the impression that Janet was...

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Brilliant. Love it. 

Posted on Thu, 21 Nov 2019

Brilliant. Love it. 

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Posted in Mars

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Thank you. And now that makes

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

Thank you. And now that makes perfect sense. 

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Posted in A Jewel

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I love this. 

Posted on Sun, 17 Nov 2019

I love this. 
But what is Kennabi?

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I agree. I like these kind of

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

I agree. I like these kind of memory pieces. However, and it's just my opinion, I didn't like the '...'. I don't think you needed them. 
 
'Sisters are great but there are times in certain adolescent years that older sisters can view...

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Posted in Rockefeller Center Babysitting Service

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I agree. Like the movement

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

I agree. Like the movement between the images and also the final two lines. 
 

A couple of things. I can't see how a 'car slams shut'. 'a car door slams, shut, cocoons...'

 

What's 'bouguet'? Do you mean bouquet? 

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I love the setting. 

Posted on Tue, 12 Nov 2019

I love the setting. 
 

Just an opinion. 
 

I'd change the structure. So you have verses of 5, 3, 3, 5. The first 2 verses I'd leave. 'a soubrette I had met' can go and the third line, 'a dancer from the Moulin Rouge'....

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