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Echoing the comments above.

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Echoing the comments above. You have a decent story arc and the characters are all engaging and credible. The dialogue is great. You have something bigger than the sum of its parts. Keep 'em coming, CM. 

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Yes, I read one of the

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

Yes, I read one of the Sizewell reactors was due to be decommissioned in July but the government are looking to extend its life. The whole "energy security" issue is a bit of a mess and will be difficult for quite a while. Food for thought....

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Thinking of you, Jean. Sounds

Posted on Fri, 27 May 2022

Thinking of you, Jean. Sounds like you have committed to the course of treatment so hopefully it will all pay off. Look after yourself. Paul x

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Sounds like the Muggins

Posted on Sat, 28 May 2022

Sounds like the Muggins family had a good time despite the hiccups. I would love to go to Turkey one day! 

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"Folks flock to factory and

Posted on Wed, 25 May 2022

"Folks flock to factory and mill.." "Some nice alliteration and a good rhythm to this one, Rhiannon. Enjoyed. Paul :) 

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Ruminations about Putinpot in

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

Ruminations about Putinpot in Turkey. Don't let a despot ruin your holiday. Interesting thoughts about democracy and communism. 

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A moving summation of a Luna

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

A moving summation of a Luna Moth's life. Beautifully done, Jenny. Paul 

 

 

 

 

 

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"Handsaw of morning dreams.."

Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022

"Handsaw of morning dreams.." A propped on peninsular branches of a Night Heron poem. Beautifully done :) 

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You seem to have lost the

Posted on Sat, 21 May 2022

You seem to have lost the previous complimentary comments. Oh... into the breach then...A wonderful poem erring on the side of cosmic philosophy. Paul 

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A sweeping, poetic account of

Posted on Tue, 17 May 2022

A sweeping, poetic account of morning, noon and night! Very nicely done, Rhiannon. Paul :) 

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