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A tantalising final line

Posted on Mon, 11 Apr 2022

A tantalising final line which sets off the rest of the story. Another gripping tale with a twist. Nicely done, Hilary. Paul

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"musings now in poetry.."

Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022

"musings now in poetry.." "Yes, as we get older we end up valuing memories more. Referencing them in poems is as good a way as any to preserve moments for posterity. Deftly done with an articulate, light touch. Paul :)

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What a beautiful meditation.

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

What a beautiful meditation. Paul

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Posted in Looking For God In The Woods

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I must admit, I have thought

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

I must admit, I have thought about the parallels with Hitler's Operation Barbarossa in Russia. There are uncanny similarities and failings. It will be difficult to not think of the leader of the Russian Federation as "Putinpot" now I have read so...

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Oh thank you for reading it,

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

Oh thank you for reading it, David. I haven't kept the original but the theme was about redemption which isn't what I wanted to say. I guess that's the beauty of having agency over our words - we can edit/amend/update to get to where we wanna go...

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Posted in Life Through a Prism

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Yikes you are going through

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

Yikes you are going through the mill, Jean. Yes, keep us posted and do take care. I am sure this will all come out in the wash and will be in your best interests. Paul

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Yes, the situation in Ukraine

Posted on Sun, 03 Apr 2022

Yes, the situation in Ukraine remains relentlessly grim and, made worse by the atrocities uncovered following the withdrawal of Russian forces. War is the ultimate in inhumanity. Your poem makes the point forcefully and artfully. Paul

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There simply has to be an

Posted on Mon, 04 Apr 2022

There simply has to be an alternative to armed conflict these days. I don't think many in either Ukraine or Russia could believe that we would still see the application of war in the 21st century.

For what it's worth, I think Chess is also...

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Enjoyed this story, Jenny. I

Posted on Tue, 29 Mar 2022

Enjoyed this story, Jenny. I admire writers taking on longer tales and posting in instalments. It's brave and exposing. There's lots to like about the characters and the universe you created. Paul :)

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I can imagine this being a

Posted on Mon, 28 Mar 2022

I can imagine this being a children's story that younger ones would read together with their teacher. The images are classically colourful and the whimsy runs throughout. Onto the denouement...

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Three

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