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Just gorgeous. Merry

Posted on Fri, 24 Dec 2021

Just gorgeous. Merry Christmas to you, lovely Jenny. Paul x

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Another engaging tale, well

Posted on Thu, 23 Dec 2021

Another engaging tale, well told. And a time theme running all the way through, cleverly done. Your humour makes your writing so very readable. Nicely done, again. Paul :)

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"swarf curls on night's sharp

Posted on Mon, 20 Dec 2021

"swarf curls on night's sharp edge" You are on a roll with these. Beautiful words :)

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A witty, clever story. Aliens

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

A witty, clever story. Aliens are ideal for "fish out of water" scenarios. Enjoyed this. Merry Christmas. Paul

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Nicely done, Rhiannon. [And

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

Nicely done, Rhiannon. [And thank you for the thoughtful comment on my graveyard poem. I took it down to re-write as it felt too maudlin.]

Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas. Paul :)

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My daughter lives in Stoke

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

My daughter lives in Stoke
Well Newcastle-under-Lyme as she always corrects me. There is an anthemic feel to this. I look forward to your forthcoming music gig performed in front of a virtual ABCtales audience :)

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A comprehensive update

Posted on Wed, 22 Dec 2021

A comprehensive update including family history and featuring Charles Dickens. The text has come out in different sizes - just wondered if that was what was intended.

Merry Christmas to you and your family, Jean. Paul

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"flustered by widdershin

Posted on Tue, 21 Dec 2021

"flustered by widdershin stirred". Yes, some things are best left in the past and maybe it's easier and for the best that time moves forward in a linear manner. Some lovely expressions in here in a very visual poem. Paul :)

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Read with trepidation. I am

Posted on Thu, 16 Dec 2021

Read with trepidation. I am at the point in the season where I am reaching for a gun if I hear one more Buble song crooned on the radio. Thankfully, your poem was a feast of sophistication and curiosity and no direct reflection of more "Buble...

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Those last 5 lines, in

Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021

Those last 5 lines, in particular, are brilliant. Congrats on a well deserved POTD. Paul :)

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