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1710 of my comments have received 1754 Great Feedback votes

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"...symbolic and transient

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2023

"...symbolic and transient

like sprinkling of fairy

dust on a magical dream."

Such moving notes at the end of the poem. A beautiful tribute to your parents. Nicely done, Jenny.

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That's a powerful ending with

Posted on Tue, 31 Oct 2023

That's a powerful ending with your final stanza, Luigi. The meter and rhyme is very nicely done, of course. Expertly executed, sir.

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"It is revenge!. No good

Posted on Sun, 29 Oct 2023

"It is revenge!. No good crops grow from bombs."

It feels like this above line links events in the East and the storms in your beautiful part of the world. Different magnitude, of course. Not sure where it will all end now that the genie...

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Powerful words from Alfred.

Posted on Wed, 25 Oct 2023

Powerful words from Alfred. It does appear to be Armaggedon over there. Not sure where this will all end. Sooner or later, the only way forward will be compromise. It's usually the case. 

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"Perhaps it was something

Posted on Tue, 24 Oct 2023

"Perhaps it was something only a woman would understand but the process of penetrating his body with the plug left her feeling wobbly and emotionally exhausted." Honestly, Jane lol

I do love your subtle humour. It infuses your story lines...

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You deal with Caitlyn's sense

Posted on Tue, 24 Oct 2023

You deal with Caitlyn's sense of disbelief and cynicism well which complements the building tension. I like the period feel of the conversation and the looming peril with the horseman. Looking forward to reading the conclusion, Penny.

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"Rays of light herald

Posted on Tue, 24 Oct 2023

"Rays of light herald
the rising sun:
the night is passing,"

What a beautiful opening three lines. An evocative poem and, yes, one ray at at time. Just lovely, Rhiannon. Paul

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Thanks for posting the update

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023

Thanks for posting the update, Jean. Of course, everyone is rooting for you. Another brave, clear account of your journey which will help others reading who are in a similar situation. Take care of yourself. Paul x

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"But it didn't

Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023

"But it didn't

Because I've finished it, it seems

Unless this is just a dream"

I think I have seen you post elsewhere on SM about insomnia. Well...if it fires your writing then we are all the benficiaries! Keep 'em coming,...

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"We view carnage: a word made

Posted on Wed, 25 Oct 2023

"We view carnage: a word made from flesh,"

Powerful stuff, Lena. A poem our world leaders should read and heed. Paul x

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