The Birds
By agnosticnun
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She pulls us, unknowing
Demure as a winter landscape
And yet she seems like lush black loam -
As if the freshest worms nestled in her hair.
Poor child.
We cannot help the way
We chase, pulling strands when she droops
Scenting blood.
The bears would have loved her, but the little men
Found her first, jealous
And fierce with their axes.
No wonder the queen could not let her be.
Or the huntsman.
Something in her speaks to the heart
Of every heart half pure -
Hungry, selfish, yet open enough
To grieve the innocence we will devour.
She begged. Unthinkably generous
They set her in diamond to keep her safe,
And so she lay at peace.
Until an incautious prince rode by…
We watch.
Soon, the coffin will open.
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Sleeping Beauty so eloquently
Snow White so eloquently articulated. Dark, foreboding and atmospheric. Just lovely...
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You've caught a wonderful
You've caught a wonderful ephemeral moment of this film perfectly. I really enjoyed your poem, it was captivating.
Jenny.
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Nicely told traditional tale
Nicely told traditional tale with dark undertones. Is the prince simply incautious or a bit 'too adventurous as some people have suggested? Answers on a postcard.
Luigi x
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Wonderful pick!
Wonderful pick! Congratulations on the golden cherries
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