Eva Trondheim looked at the telephone. In fact, she was staring at it. Would he ring again? Why did she care? She'd seen him going past her window in...
Mr. Wickes loved his maths, He set his boys on all the right paths. With logarithms and ninety degree angles, He knotted their brains in a variety of...
I saw you in a flower, The brightest, sunniest one there is. I saw you in a landscape, So green, so yellow, so ever blue, With red-rooved houses and...
I don't think I'd trust the devil with his cloven hooves whatever were happening. As for being ruthless in his past that seems par for the course. Enjoyed this piece of fantasy.
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Posted on Sat, 19 Nov 2022
Hi,
Another little gem, Rhiannon. A colourful description. Enjoyed reading !!!
hilary ...
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Posted on Sun, 20 Nov 2022
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This poem is packed with vivid imagery and deeply personal memories. Enjoyed reading !!!
hilary ...
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Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
Hi,
I don't think I'd trust the devil with his cloven hooves whatever were happening. As for being ruthless in his past that seems par for the course. Enjoyed this piece of fantasy.
hilary
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I liked this, Rhiannon. Nice
Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
I liked this, Rhiannon. Nice rhyme and intelligent nod to Blake's 'Tiger, Tiger'
Much enjoyed.
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Read full commentPosted in Guard!!
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Posted on Wed, 09 Nov 2022
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I really liked this one, Jenny; so evocativve with beautiful descriptions : ' blackberry and gold' was delicious !!!. Unique, abstruse and esoteric.
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
Humourous take on the IP. Where would we be if we took everything literally !!!?
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Justification?
The rain is really menacing
Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2022
The rain is really menacing and this is reflected in the story's momentum gathering pace with the floods.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in You Never Know
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Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
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Nice ghostly tale and well-written as ever.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
Lovely to go on one of your walks. I enjoyed imagining !!!

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Inspiring autumnal reverie:
Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022
Inspiring autumnal reverie: an enjoyable read with an enticing sense of mystery !!!
hilary
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