Donna struggled with her shopping; she was eight and a half months pregnant now, so it wouldn't be long. Snow drifted down and covered her fur fabric...
It was especially difficult for the elderly in the lockdown and a tragedy for them if they lost a partner. This poem is thoughtful and empathetic in their struggle to survive. Music certainly helps: it is a great comforter !...
The rain is really menacing
Posted on Mon, 24 Oct 2022
The rain is really menacing and this is reflected in the story's momentum gathering pace with the floods.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in You Never Know
HI,
Posted on Sun, 23 Oct 2022
HI,
Nice ghostly tale and well-written as ever.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in The Spirit of Jenny Jones (Part Two of Two)
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
Lovely to go on one of your walks. I enjoyed imagining !!!
Read full commentPosted in Above Old Downton Lodge
Inspiring autumnal reverie:
Posted on Sun, 16 Oct 2022
Inspiring autumnal reverie: an enjoyable read with an enticing sense of mystery !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Hunsbury Hill Country Park
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Hi Jenny,
Skilful use of language in this poem: flowed like water, a never ending stream.
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Interesting Times
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
Great little fun poem for children and educational too. I am sure they would enjoy!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Fish Finger Maths!
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2022
Hi Jenny,
It was especially difficult for the elderly in the lockdown and a tragedy for them if they lost a partner. This poem is thoughtful and empathetic in their struggle to survive. Music certainly helps: it is a great comforter !...
Read full commentPosted in Only The Lonely
hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2022
hi Rhiannon,
This did indeed have a musical flow to the correlating change of the seasons, a never ending cycle. Very nicely done !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in Preparation
Hi,
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Hi,
Poor farmer is all I can say. Enjoyed this longer tale, Paul. Fantasy seems to suit your creative gift !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in In the Vale of the Shadow King (Part Six of Six)
Hi,
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Hi,
Sounds like a car crash of a car. Hope you are safe !!!
hilary
Read full commentPosted in I Recognized it.
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