Donna struggled with her shopping; she was eight and a half months pregnant now, so it wouldn't be long. Snow drifted down and covered her fur fabric...
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
I loved the description of the imps, with their red torsos, furry legs and cloven hooves. This shadow king seems sinister; I want to know how it all turns out. Fascinating !
This is a beautiful poem, Jenny. I enjoyed reading immensely. You are so good at these nature poems and the information you provided as background was fabulous !
Hi,
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Hi,
I just loved the passage in italics; it was beautiful prose. Look forward to seeing it through !
hilary
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hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi Rhiannon,
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
hilary
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hi.
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi.
I liked this poem. Some interesting use of language. It works !
hilary
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hi,
Posted on Mon, 26 Sep 2022
hi,
I like it too, Sean: short and sweet !
hilary
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
I enjoyed the fruitiness of this, some engaging rhymes too. An enjoyable read !
hilary
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Hi marandina.
Posted on Tue, 27 Sep 2022
Hi marandina.
I loved the description of the imps, with their red torsos, furry legs and cloven hooves. This shadow king seems sinister; I want to know how it all turns out. Fascinating !
hilary ...
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Hi,
Posted on Fri, 23 Sep 2022
Hi,
I think there's something comforting about the sound of the rain. Your poem had that effect on me too.
hilary
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Hi marandina,
Posted on Wed, 21 Sep 2022
Hi marandina,
What with Harry Potter and such this sort of stuff is incredibly popular. Enjoying reading, bringing out the kid in me.
hilary
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Hi Jenny,
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
Hi Jenny,
Very dreamy and nice olfactories too. I loved the squelchiness underfoot !
hilary
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Hi,
Posted on Sat, 17 Sep 2022
Hi,
This is a beautiful poem, Jenny. I enjoyed reading immensely. You are so good at these nature poems and the information you provided as background was fabulous !
hilary
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