'The White Orchid' was a popular club, a bit of a dive in truth, but here you could pick up plenty of pretty girls, all at a price. Lily-Rose, Yvette...
I hear the pitter-pattering of the rain, And see pellucid drops falling like pearls. And in the distance a roseate suffusion Is behind verdant, green...
It was especially difficult for the elderly in the lockdown and a tragedy for them if they lost a partner. This poem is thoughtful and empathetic in their struggle to survive. Music certainly helps: it is a great comforter !...
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
Hi Jenny,
Posted on Tue, 18 Oct 2022
Hi Jenny,
Skilful use of language in this poem: flowed like water, a never ending stream.
hilary
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Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 13 Oct 2022
Hi Rhiannon,
Great little fun poem for children and educational too. I am sure they would enjoy!
hilary
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Hi Jenny,
Posted on Wed, 12 Oct 2022
Hi Jenny,
It was especially difficult for the elderly in the lockdown and a tragedy for them if they lost a partner. This poem is thoughtful and empathetic in their struggle to survive. Music certainly helps: it is a great comforter !...
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hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Tue, 11 Oct 2022
hi Rhiannon,
This did indeed have a musical flow to the correlating change of the seasons, a never ending cycle. Very nicely done !!!
hilary
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Hi,
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Hi,
Poor farmer is all I can say. Enjoyed this longer tale, Paul. Fantasy seems to suit your creative gift !!!
hilary
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Hi,
Posted on Sun, 09 Oct 2022
Hi,
Sounds like a car crash of a car. Hope you are safe !!!
hilary
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Hi,
Posted on Fri, 07 Oct 2022
Hi,
The narrative is progressing nicely : some wonderful, descriptive writing. Waiting for the final curtain !!!
hilary
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Hi,
Posted on Sun, 02 Oct 2022
Hi,
I just loved the passage in italics; it was beautiful prose. Look forward to seeing it through !
hilary
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hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi Rhiannon,
I don't think many conkers become trees. I remember hoardes of boys throwing up sticks to try and make them fall much to the consternation of neighbours. Nice poem : rich !
hilary
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hi.
Posted on Thu, 29 Sep 2022
hi.
I liked this poem. Some interesting use of language. It works !
hilary
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