We’re playing statues in the hall. I’m at the front door, trying to sneak up on Angela in her house. Her mum has come into some money and bought her...
The hall is not much warmer than the landing, but the light left on in my room lets us see each other a bit better. Angela looks up at me, her golden...
1725 of my comments have received 1763 Great Feedback votes
1 Vote
we were all modern once. well
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
we were all modern once. well, apart from me. I was talking to my neighbour yesterday and she was telling me how she was at her grannies and people were out in the rain flinging coins under the tracks as the last tram passed (away). I was able to...
lost some narrative structure here. Compelling as it is, turned into a rant. You can't hate your reader for not knowing. Not experiencing. Teach us in truth by telling a story that resonates in our hearts. The simple truth I understand is most-...
this is great. I enjoyed reading it. I can see how so much training would make you incredibly fit, but, ironically, have such adverse affect on your bones. The killer line is it became drudgery. Just another way of making a buck. Amen to that. I...
we were all modern once. well
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
we were all modern once. well, apart from me. I was talking to my neighbour yesterday and she was telling me how she was at her grannies and people were out in the rain flinging coins under the tracks as the last tram passed (away). I was able to...
Read full commentPosted in Buses
rbs chairman £700 000 per
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
rbs chairman £700 000 per annum pension fund. ahem
Read full commentPosted in September 15th 2008
we all need to gather and
Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020
we all need to gather and tend as much light as we can.
Read full commentPosted in Jar of Lights
sad. but was it prayer (and
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020
sad. but was it prayer (and time) wasted?
Read full commentPosted in A Lesson In Life. Part Two.
I guess we read things into
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020
I guess we read things into objects. Can't say I like Gordon.
Read full commentPosted in Gordon Ramsay, A Lesson In Life. Part One.
I guess we all worry that way
Posted on Sun, 09 Feb 2020
I guess we all worry that way and wolves come in many forms.
Read full commentPosted in The Last Footprint
a different generation, a
Posted on Fri, 07 Feb 2020
a different generation, a different life. In some ways a harder life.
Read full commentPosted in Burkette Greene
lost some narrative structure
Posted on Fri, 07 Feb 2020
lost some narrative structure here. Compelling as it is, turned into a rant. You can't hate your reader for not knowing. Not experiencing. Teach us in truth by telling a story that resonates in our hearts. The simple truth I understand is most-...
Read full commentPosted in Recognizing a Hero In Addict (7 cont&8)
this is great. I enjoyed
Posted on Tue, 14 Jan 2020
this is great. I enjoyed reading it. I can see how so much training would make you incredibly fit, but, ironically, have such adverse affect on your bones. The killer line is it became drudgery. Just another way of making a buck. Amen to that. I...
Read full commentPosted in An Unexpected Change
yes, nothing to do with
Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020
yes, nothing to do with global warming - apparently!
Read full commentPosted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.
Pages