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tears were not enough
After the funeral, Davy nursed a lukewarm can of Skol lager and chose a quiet, empty corner of the church hall near the swing of the door and stink...
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I remember her now
A guitar shaped body Jutting hips that hook a look Pubic hair and yearning – Desire singes and drowns shyness Unbuttons her blouse Plucks the straps...
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IQ test 3
Somebody had flung a scratchy blanket over my body to bury the unwashed. I woke up to the stench of my own body bathed in sweat. Eyes plumped by lack...
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A refugee
Your life laid bare The sudden intimacy of violence Blood in the air Fully exposed. They place their faith Your lips, your tits, your cunt You squat...
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Ernie at the edge of the world
Ernie left his flat on the eight floor of Dunswin Court at around three o’clock in the morning. He’s got two bedrooms, but only uses one to live in...
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the art of truthfulness I
Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019
the art of truthfulness I like that. Lots of layers of meaning. Adds strenght to the story.
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (6)
I think you/ve caught it jane
Posted on Thu, 28 Feb 2019
I think you/ve caught it jane, what I'm not sure, but I like it.
Read full commentPosted in That's Not The Way I Go
lovely story Harry. We have a
Posted on Wed, 27 Feb 2019
lovely story Harry. We have a cat. I say we, but it's my partners. She rescured it when it started mooching around our back and would't go away. It started with feeding her. Then a wee shelter out the back. Then a shelter in the house....well, we...
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 4) (1)
I saw this documetary ahd she
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...
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wiser because they need to be
Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019
wiser because they need to be.
Read full commentPosted in One.
you caught it, the joy of not
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in La Femme d'argent
a pyramid of selves go on
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting.
Read full commentPosted in PCT Beginning
this is great. Charlie and
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable.
Read full commentPosted in Charlie and Eliza (Pt 1)
brialliant. Everythng is
Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019
brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...
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keep costs to a minimum,
Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019
keep costs to a minimum, drive labour costs down and the labour force to work harder and harder. Run a monopoloy that's not a monopoly. Make vast profits that are not profits. Yes. meet Amazon. Nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in Pontius (Ch.15): Part 1
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