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the day before Christmas
Christmas Eve is the cruellest day. Doreen steps up behind an old guy stinking of fags and booze, sporting a baseball cap back to front, reddish hair...
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tender souls 2
Hallelujah said it wasn’t far and he carried their suitcase. But by the time they got there Ray’s feet hurt. Hoar frost made the slopes from the Old...
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angry-white man
BNP cynicism. First came the drunken Paddy. Then the grasping Jew. Smelly Paki. Polish Plasterer Romanian rats Who’s to blame for our nation’s shame...
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the fifth day
It was the fifth hour, after the day of rest, when in he went down. A great silence filled the trees and dust lay over all the land. In the shadows,...
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agonising questions
Pain we get free? No’ well? – some liberty! Get down on your knees and pray You don’t have to be that way It’s no easy becoming Freud Asking question...
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hard to get [h]old of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
hard to get [h]old of
interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.
Read full commentPosted in No Man's land
Don't know why your shorten
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.
Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.
Read full commentPosted in Shredding
humble and sad, but never bad
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
humble and sad, but never bad.
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I'm excited about what's
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm excited about what's about to happen too.
Read full commentPosted in Out of Control-5
psalms [palms of hands]
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
psalms [palms of hands]
type out a candlestick
don;t don't
plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.
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Fracking bomb is captialised
Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014
Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.
Read full commentPosted in This life is a plastic wrap
yeh, who can afford to live
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
yeh, who can afford to live in DC? But you'd need a better imagination to figure house prices in London. 'buy a guy' sounds like an offer and not a preposition.
Oh, the Fab Four, sounds like some obscure band.
Read full commentPosted in 17. Do You Believe In Magick?
start chiselling now lavadis
Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
start chiselling now lavadis
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not sure what a foofie valve
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014
not sure what a foofie valve is, but the competition is hotting up.
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What I've read so far is
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014
What I've read so far is intriguing.
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