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the fifth day
It was the fifth hour, after the day of rest, when in he went down. A great silence filled the trees and dust lay over all the land. In the shadows,...
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agonising questions
Pain we get free? No’ well? – some liberty! Get down on your knees and pray You don’t have to be that way It’s no easy becoming Freud Asking question...
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snakes and adders
After spending our dinner money on sweets, Brendy nipped across from St. Andy’s school and bought two single fags from McLaren’s newsagent for the...
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the ring of truth
We knew too much of life How to act How to react Kick your cunt in Extraordinary stroke of luck What the fuck? See – you looking at me? Up until then...
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grace
After a while she put the book down, Flaubert’s Parrot . She’d gotten a bit confused. There was a magazine rack with a pair of tatty blue slippers in...
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an oldie, nicely told. I'll
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006
an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done
Read full commentPosted in An Atheist Family Christmas
nice story, lovely ending, an
Posted on Sun, 02 Mar 2014
nice story, lovely ending, an aphorism.
Read full commentPosted in Más que la belleza
some lovely imagery.
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014
some lovely imagery.
Read full commentPosted in The secret to Hollyhocks
This is very good. Jason's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...
Read full commentPosted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 2 of 3
ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be
Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014
ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be watching for more of this, made me smile.
Read full commentPosted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3
yep, a book with insight for
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.
Read full commentPosted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman
It's a bit like a video game.
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
It's a bit like a video game.
Read full commentPosted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
really liked this elsie,
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2014
really liked this elsie, rings true. That's the best compliment I can give.
Read full commentPosted in Other Fiction - Treasure Island
A Dickens of a poem. Well
Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013
A Dickens of a poem. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Havisham
I'm not sure what the
Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2013
I'm not sure what the underlined words or italics are meant to emphasise, but there are lots of surprised in the text and I really liked it.
Read full commentPosted in Within the Mirrors
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