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Best that money can buy

By celticman on Wed, 12 Nov 2014

‘You done it yet?’ Al asked. He’d been thirty for a long time now and it was beginning to show around his mouth, which seemed to get thinner every...

Science fiction

Story

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ghost of who we've been

By celticman on Mon, 10 Nov 2014

Balletic boy’s laughter grows shrill and keen Yawning electric doors drawing them into orbit Others stop for a fag in the taxi rank Fat blokes and...

Drama

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raring

By celticman on Fri, 07 Nov 2014

Why rara aves in the study of zoology? Glorious Pere Aleatorius Cast off the die Bequest no fixed reason or why No alee or nature shelter Spinning...

Drama

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carrel

By celticman on Sat, 01 Nov 2014

You’re not there Side by side as we were Sitting stretched sometimes Sighing and nodding Chasing certain phrases Folded together newspaper pages Worn...

Philosophy

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dimly-lit students'. You

Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2014

dimly-lit students'. You maybe better finding another description that's too much like a light bulb.

.There's no such thing...' ditch the full stop at the begining of this section.

Do what thou wilt is the whole...

Posted in Do what thou wilt

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yep, I'm with Charles Schultz

Posted on Sun, 21 Sep 2014

yep, I'm with Charles Schultz, although, of course, my family never had a car, because only rich folk did, but hey, it's a sunny day. I liked this.

Posted in Don't Ask

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yeh, I get it, but someone

Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014

yeh, I get it, but someone stole it off me.

It's something the Asian students do TO WORN...think you missed out a few words here.

great story. true to life (and I'm not a great fan of Virginia Woolf either).

Posted in I have no sympathy

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No one is stopping you. Write

Posted on Wed, 10 Sep 2014

No one is stopping you. Write and be wonderful.

Posted in I Hate Being 19!

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Nothing is something and this

Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014

Nothing is something and this is dazzling.

Posted in After Death

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Geoff seemed like one of the

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014

Geoff seemed like one of the good guys. Yet he get's done over as a bad guy. Great volte and twist at the end. Great story.

Posted in Four doors down

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the rain, the clouds, the cry

Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014

the rain, the clouds, the cry of the children, a background noise dripping with melancholy. After the darkness there may be light, but the darkness remanis.

Posted in After the flood

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hard to get [h]old of

Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014

hard to get [h]old of

interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.