‘I never met Mr Hitler but he seemed like a nice man,’ said Mum. ‘I said Hiller Mum. Hiller!’ Mum wasn’t fazed by my outburst. ‘That’s what I said.’...
Sunlight lacks warmth Light without you Forget loyalty and respect Dark rise of swollen belly in our bed Glimmering embers of what we said Love gone...
Christmas Eve is the cruellest day. Doreen steps up behind an old guy stinking of fags and booze, sporting a baseball cap back to front, reddish hair...
Hallelujah said it wasn’t far and he carried their suitcase. But by the time they got there Ray’s feet hurt. Hoar frost made the slopes from the Old...
yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....
I guess it's a collection of thoughts and feelings rolling in youth and finding nihilism and no answers which is a kind of answer. That and vodka, of course.
I'm not sure if you've got the geography of the planets in your head, but I'm guessing you do. Interesting. Sci-fi is a difficult mix of the known and unknown. I think you've got that here.
Lovely and the denouement
Posted on Wed, 01 Jun 2016
Lovely and the denouement fits like a driver's glove.
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yeh, I like this or get it,
Posted on Mon, 30 May 2016
yeh, I like this or get it, as like seems the wrong words, as does like. I'm sure you know what I mean.
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the rise and fall of us all.
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
the rise and fall of us all.
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yellow, my favouritie colour
Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016
yellow, my favouritie colour and this is so sweet, it's right up my street. Mellow and blue it combines the colours of you.
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yep. 3000 words isn't a lot;
Posted on Thu, 12 May 2016
yep. 3000 words isn't a lot; only it is. All the reasons you outline are lived examples, but what struck me most was the word 'perfect'. First 3000 is never going to be perfect, if it's legible, or evern if it isn't, that's a start. An outline....
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he is what he'll be, that's
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2016
he is what he'll be, that's plain to see.
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how could you miss it, insert
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2016
how could you miss it, insert? you read everything, even the stuff I've yet to write. that's how good you are.
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I guess it's a collection of
Posted on Sun, 10 Apr 2016
I guess it's a collection of thoughts and feelings rolling in youth and finding nihilism and no answers which is a kind of answer. That and vodka, of course.
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I'm not sure if you've got
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016
I'm not sure if you've got the geography of the planets in your head, but I'm guessing you do. Interesting. Sci-fi is a difficult mix of the known and unknown. I think you've got that here.
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you go from starring in the
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2016
you go from starring in the latest fitness video to a cowboy film. You never fail to entertain, Jenny.
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