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Debbie Harry -shut your mouth.
Blondie Denis Denis. Desire of the head. Desire of the heart. What I wish. What I want. Body hell, testing place. Let’s start. Love -fuck forever...
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godstruck
I mourn the sum of you. The loss of you. The only one I knew. No sweets can make him sweeter. No temper-tantrum tears. No more. Show me the runes. Of...
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Cogito Ergo Something Something
I’m a creature of habit. All that I seem. An Aristotelian ideal, Proof that I’m real. I believe in faculties. A soul's natural fall. Christians,...
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Radio static
I go for a drive. My thoughts follow the road. Squeezing up next to each other. I brake. Everyone hurries when they’re younger. Everything a bother...
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Cat's cradle.
Lonnie waited at the counter for the store-serving person (non-android) to notice him. Artfact was the kind of shop Lonnie tended to avoid. ‘HISTORY...
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Don't know why your shorten
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.
Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.
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humble and sad, but never bad
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
humble and sad, but never bad.
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I'm excited about what's
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm excited about what's about to happen too.
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psalms [palms of hands]
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
psalms [palms of hands]
type out a candlestick
don;t don't
plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.
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Fracking bomb is captialised
Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014
Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.
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yeh, who can afford to live
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
yeh, who can afford to live in DC? But you'd need a better imagination to figure house prices in London. 'buy a guy' sounds like an offer and not a preposition.
Oh, the Fab Four, sounds like some obscure band.
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start chiselling now lavadis
Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
start chiselling now lavadis
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not sure what a foofie valve
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014
not sure what a foofie valve is, but the competition is hotting up.
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What I've read so far is
Posted on Wed, 02 Jul 2014
What I've read so far is intriguing.
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the use of quartz stone for
Posted on Fri, 23 May 2014
the use of quartz stone for freezing it one of those details that make everything so real. Look forward to more. Another great episode. I'm wondering what Ian's game is? Something about him getting drunk so easily points to some kind of illness?...
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