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the day before Christmas
Christmas Eve is the cruellest day. Doreen steps up behind an old guy stinking of fags and booze, sporting a baseball cap back to front, reddish hair...
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tender souls 2
Hallelujah said it wasn’t far and he carried their suitcase. But by the time they got there Ray’s feet hurt. Hoar frost made the slopes from the Old...
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angry-white man
BNP cynicism. First came the drunken Paddy. Then the grasping Jew. Smelly Paki. Polish Plasterer Romanian rats Who’s to blame for our nation’s shame...
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the fifth day
It was the fifth hour, after the day of rest, when in he went down. A great silence filled the trees and dust lay over all the land. In the shadows,...
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agonising questions
Pain we get free? No’ well? – some liberty! Get down on your knees and pray You don’t have to be that way It’s no easy becoming Freud Asking question...
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excellent, fast paced with
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
excellent, fast paced with characters that stand out and great ending. bound to be trouble. Ideal for the dealer.
Read full commentPosted in Chapter Three
eighteen, bursting with life,
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
eighteen, bursting with life, when you believe your a man but just a boy, chained to the grass, forever, or until forgotten. Sad. Funnily enough a guy reversed in a van today and shouted my brother's name. he thought I was him. He's dead, of...
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sleep is so important. The
Posted on Thu, 02 Jul 2015
sleep is so important. The more we think how important it is the less likely we are to enjoy it.
Read full commentPosted in A.M.
the only winners are the
Posted on Wed, 01 Jul 2015
the only winners are the losers. sadly. Enjoyed this snatch of life.
Read full commentPosted in Fay's Flutter
music does the work of place
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
music does the work of place and time. Lard cake sounds disgusting, but anything sweet is a treat. Then the ending. Makes you think. Poor wee souls.
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sounds about right
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
sounds about right -unfortunately.
Read full commentPosted in Caliphate
my votes for Darwin. I'm sure
Posted on Sun, 28 Jun 2015
my votes for Darwin. I'm sure God would understand. I'm only a man.
Read full commentPosted in I Can't Believe In Darwin's Theory
Guilt and duty. Those
Posted on Fri, 26 Jun 2015
Guilt and duty. Those sisphyean calls we heed or not are played out here and I like your ending. There's a sadness that runs through the story and finds expression in relief - and guilt.
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Lovely and gentle
Posted on Wed, 24 Jun 2015
Lovely and gentle remembrances filled with the flowers and icons of childhood. A treat to read.
Years ago my grandparents did not have TV or fridge a long time; [This is ambiguious. Your grandparents did not have a TV and fridge...
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all's well in that flag
Posted on Mon, 22 Jun 2015
all's well in that flag-waving hell, some little grief that runs too deep, or something similiar your may say, but we live to fight another day. That's a ryhme crime!
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