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The Last Act of Love.
Dr Love placed the folders carefully on the table between a tape cassettes, with ear-muffler headphones plugged into it, and an unplugged kettle the...
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simple men
‘Nothing to shout about,’ said Lawson. ‘Nothing to worry about either. Quick in and out job.’ He fidgeted, adjusting the specs on his nose. No matter...
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tender souls
The specialist spoke of blastocyst grading, vesicles, stress pathways, embryo culture, fertilised eggs and the importance of maternal diet in the...
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Crow no more.
Did you see mum in her prime Dodder as if in fine wine Totter on a lost wee soul Garment half-clean, rents unseen Half-smile at familiar faces Where...
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Resurrection
Rooted in dry earth Up above Fragments of hymns Drift in skirlin’ wind Cock crows Quiet as Sunday Faith in ghostly bones through the misty town...
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Childhood’s a place, son, and
Posted on Sun, 20 Apr 2014
Childhood’s a place, son, and not a time. ' visited and revisited. A holiday from the self. Lovely.
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thanks blackjack, I'm working
Posted on Fri, 23 Aug 2013
thanks blackjack, I'm working my way through it, knocking off the crusty corners of the worst bloomers.
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I don't know enough about
Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014
I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.
Read full commentPosted in It is I, Abiku
the crew seem afire and I'm
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
the crew seem afire and I'm sure that death and glory is their desire.
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supernatural ending Vera.
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.
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I'm sure Kellen could get
Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014
I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.
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an oldie, nicely told. I'll
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006
an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done
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nice story, lovely ending, an
Posted on Sun, 02 Mar 2014
nice story, lovely ending, an aphorism.
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some lovely imagery.
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014
some lovely imagery.
Read full commentPosted in The secret to Hollyhocks
This is very good. Jason's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...
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