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school photos 64
Jean and Jo stood to the side of the hearse’s tailgate, fag smoke and aftershave, a toxic mix, wafting from behind them, the jingling of pocket...
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John waited until the front door opened and slammed shut, the sound of a car choking and flooding into life, before he shuttled out of bed and...
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school photos 62
Detective Close drove to the house in an unmarked police car, a lime-coloured Cortina, and parked with the rear tyres clipping the kerb. His shiny...
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notes for tomorrow.
My face and body blur into view with the neonatal features of a melting snowman, something crying and vaguely human. Find a formula. Then milk and...
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school photos 48
‘For God sake keep an eye on her so she doesn’t so something silly.’ Auntie Caroline was washing the dishes in the bigger of the kitchen sinks and...
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yep, a book with insight for
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.
Read full commentPosted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman
It's a bit like a video game.
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
It's a bit like a video game.
Read full commentPosted in Euphoria Blake: Infernally Divine
really liked this elsie,
Posted on Mon, 13 Jan 2014
really liked this elsie, rings true. That's the best compliment I can give.
Read full commentPosted in Other Fiction - Treasure Island
A Dickens of a poem. Well
Posted on Mon, 09 Dec 2013
A Dickens of a poem. Well done!
Read full commentPosted in Havisham
I'm not sure what the
Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2013
I'm not sure what the underlined words or italics are meant to emphasise, but there are lots of surprised in the text and I really liked it.
Read full commentPosted in Within the Mirrors
enjoyed this. thanks.
Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2008
enjoyed this. thanks.Read full commentPosted in Bonnie Prince Charlie and the 1745 Jacobite Rebellion
I especially liked the first
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2011
I especially liked the first stanza, but that is maybe that was just my certain boyish impulses. Great stuff Chris. It's not often I'm proud of 'Futility.'Read full commentPosted in Futility
evocative. well done.
Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2010
evocative. well done.Read full commentPosted in The approach of winter
Needs a bit of proof reading
Posted on Tue, 09 Mar 2010
Needs a bit of proof reading eg 'She was an attractive and she knew it.' And there is a bit or repetition, you could cut a few hundred words quite easily. A good story, which I enjoyed.Read full commentPosted in Blood Money
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