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school photos 38
I’m not sure what to say or how to put it. ‘Ah know it sounds daft, but sometimes when Ah go to bed Ah sleepwalk.’ Mr Williams shook his head and...
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school photos 37
I peeked into Mr Williams’s office. He hunched forward on his chair, one knee pointing beneath his desk, his torso slightly off kilter with his foot...
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school photos 36
I expected more fuss to be made about absconding from the ward. A few of the nursing staff heed and hawed, when I’d arrived back and made stupid tut-...
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school photos 35
A companionable smog of fag smoke trailed behind passengers as they eased themselves into the cold and each wandered off alone to find a place to...
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The Atas Work Experiment
I make a decent living out of other folk’s misery. It’s nothing personal. I’m a professional and I’m cheap— fifty-quid-an-hour and expenses. That’s...
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Nothing is something and this
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Nothing is something and this is dazzling.
Read full commentPosted in After Death
Geoff seemed like one of the
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
Geoff seemed like one of the good guys. Yet he get's done over as a bad guy. Great volte and twist at the end. Great story.
Read full commentPosted in Four doors down
the rain, the clouds, the cry
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
the rain, the clouds, the cry of the children, a background noise dripping with melancholy. After the darkness there may be light, but the darkness remanis.
Read full commentPosted in After the flood
hard to get [h]old of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
hard to get [h]old of
interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.
Read full commentPosted in No Man's land
Don't know why your shorten
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.
Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.
Read full commentPosted in Shredding
humble and sad, but never bad
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
humble and sad, but never bad.
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I'm excited about what's
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm excited about what's about to happen too.
Read full commentPosted in Out of Control-5
psalms [palms of hands]
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
psalms [palms of hands]
type out a candlestick
don;t don't
plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.
Read full commentPosted in A late summers day
Fracking bomb is captialised
Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014
Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.
Read full commentPosted in This life is a plastic wrap
yeh, who can afford to live
Posted on Sat, 12 Jul 2014
yeh, who can afford to live in DC? But you'd need a better imagination to figure house prices in London. 'buy a guy' sounds like an offer and not a preposition.
Oh, the Fab Four, sounds like some obscure band.
Read full commentPosted in 17. Do You Believe In Magick?
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