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You Can't Take Away a Nation.
You can’t take away how we grow. But that is how it seems. What the fuck do you know? Cameron, Clegg, Miliband, cui bono ? Bollinger babblers and...
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Muddler
A puddle for a head. Do the maths. I’m in decline. But I feel fine. I’m human. That’s my failing. A life past caring. I’m glitter and glue. Tweaked...
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Hope Street
She loved that story of how they met. Telling it to her friend Julie on a rare night out made her smile and her voice shine. She is tender with...
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Lockhart 2
I wish things could have been different. The moon shimmered through the uncurtained windows giving a metallic glow to the room. I was splintered in...
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Lockhart
I’m looking back at notebooks we kept at Marxist school. It wasn’t called that of of course. It was a loose collective of forward looking people...
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No one is stopping you. Write
Posted on Wed, 10 Sep 2014
No one is stopping you. Write and be wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in I Hate Being 19!
Nothing is something and this
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Nothing is something and this is dazzling.
Read full commentPosted in After Death
Geoff seemed like one of the
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
Geoff seemed like one of the good guys. Yet he get's done over as a bad guy. Great volte and twist at the end. Great story.
Read full commentPosted in Four doors down
the rain, the clouds, the cry
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
the rain, the clouds, the cry of the children, a background noise dripping with melancholy. After the darkness there may be light, but the darkness remanis.
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hard to get [h]old of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
hard to get [h]old of
interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.
Read full commentPosted in No Man's land
Don't know why your shorten
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.
Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.
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humble and sad, but never bad
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
humble and sad, but never bad.
Read full commentPosted in Mistakes
I'm excited about what's
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm excited about what's about to happen too.
Read full commentPosted in Out of Control-5
psalms [palms of hands]
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
psalms [palms of hands]
type out a candlestick
don;t don't
plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.
Read full commentPosted in A late summers day
Fracking bomb is captialised
Posted on Wed, 30 Jul 2014
Fracking bomb is captialised and uncapitalised. I share many of your concerns.
Read full commentPosted in This life is a plastic wrap
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