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Trench Feet
Mother was pleased that Father was dead, because the thought of me getting divorced from a wonderful girl that had given me everything and three...
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Life in bits
I picked up a photo of Billy Quinn the other day. Don’t ask me where I got it. He’s handsome. I don’t remember him being handsome. I never remember...
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happy chappy
Got the letter I’d been waiting on. I’d a quick shifty through it. The NHS Complaints Procedure is a joke. It begins with a lie: ‘we would like to...
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school photos 72
‘Aye, I remember that well. Your mum always got her own way.’ John covered his mouth with his hand as he yawned. He grunted, his fingers winding...
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school photos 71
Exhaustion penetrated the pores of John’s face, slackened his jaw, and dulled the light in his pale-green eyes to cataract grey. He cocked his head,...
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thanks blackjack, I'm working
Posted on Fri, 23 Aug 2013
thanks blackjack, I'm working my way through it, knocking off the crusty corners of the worst bloomers.
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I don't know enough about
Posted on Wed, 02 Apr 2014
I don't know enough about poetry to coment about rhythm, metre or lieation, but the imagery is wonderful and the voice is true.
Read full commentPosted in It is I, Abiku
the crew seem afire and I'm
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
the crew seem afire and I'm sure that death and glory is their desire.
Read full commentPosted in The Crew of the Wolverine
supernatural ending Vera.
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
supernatural ending Vera. which means you can do and say anythng and nobody believes you.
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I'm sure Kellen could get
Posted on Sat, 22 Mar 2014
I'm sure Kellen could get used to Jake and others' suffering and getting payback.
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an oldie, nicely told. I'll
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2006
an oldie, nicely told. I'll have a look at your new book. well done
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some lovely imagery.
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2014
some lovely imagery.
Read full commentPosted in The secret to Hollyhocks
This is very good. Jason's
Posted on Fri, 14 Feb 2014
This is very good. Jason's voice is just right. You don't need to say 'I make an effort at politeness'. You've already shown it and that's added commentary. Similiarly, appearances' sake is a bit convoluted and would be better left as appearance...
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ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be
Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014
ah, sweet, but sour, I'll be watching for more of this, made me smile.
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yep, a book with insight for
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
yep, a book with insight for people that like to read and should be read.
Read full commentPosted in Reviews - In The Day by Kevin Marman
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