This was a very spiritual part to read. I agreed with her father's advice about not having a critical spirit, for me that's so important, because we are all different, and though we might not always agree, others ideas and opinions matter, they...
So much havoc being caused. Martha, Perfidia and Willow tale have their work cut out for them. I hope they use their magic to find the culprit. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Magic of this continued story, perfect as always...
I love how you have perfected the characters personalities, even down to Willow tail. Martha is handling the situation so well, even though she's angry.
An enthuiastic look at how death and the after life can be. I thought Janey's action was typical of human fear, without having time to really think about the consequence of her actions.
Some great descriptive,
Posted on Sat, 06 Nov 2021
Some great descriptive, imaginative metaphors and tension in this revengeful story, that had me gripped from beginning to end.
Jenny.
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The story is coming together
Posted on Thu, 04 Nov 2021
The story is coming together so well Penny. I feel like a fly on the wall watching the mystery unfold.
Jenny.
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This was a very spiritual
Posted on Wed, 03 Nov 2021
This was a very spiritual part to read. I agreed with her father's advice about not having a critical spirit, for me that's so important, because we are all different, and though we might not always agree, others ideas and opinions matter, they...
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So much havoc being caused.
Posted on Sat, 30 Oct 2021
So much havoc being caused. Martha, Perfidia and Willow tale have their work cut out for them. I hope they use their magic to find the culprit. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Magic of this continued story, perfect as always...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Tail" 21
Hi Penny,
Posted on Sat, 30 Oct 2021
I love how you have perfected the characters personalities, even down to Willow tail. Martha is handling the situation so well, even though she's angry.
On to next part with anticipation.
Jenny.
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Such a blessing that there
Posted on Mon, 01 Nov 2021
Such a blessing that there are those that still celebrate the season in the right way.
Thank you for sharing this.
Jenny.
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Ghoulishly great story Penny.
Posted on Sat, 30 Oct 2021
Ghoulishly great story Penny.
Happy Halloween.
Jenny.
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Sun, 31 Oct 2021
An enthuiastic look at how death and the after life can be. I thought Janey's action was typical of human fear, without having time to really think about the consequence of her actions.
Also your account of the after life was very...
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Fri, 29 Oct 2021
You capture the ghost of John perfectly and just how I imagine those moments after death and before going to the light and resting in peace to be.
The ending totally grabbed me, like the others I can't wait to read what happens next....
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Hi Jean,
Posted on Wed, 27 Oct 2021
I had no idea that George Elliot was a pen name for Mary Ann Evans, in fact I thought the writer was a male...this always surprises me.
I'm sure I've read Middlemarch back in the 1970s, but for the life of me cannot recall what it's about...
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