Try to imagine sinking into a warm bath, full of rose petals and fragrant oils, that take you to another place. This thought inspired my poem. Voices...
Part Four That same evening that the goblins made merry, twilight moon ascended stirring the atmosphere, measure of time was unimportant as radiance...
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You're continuing to keep me
Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024
You're continuing to keep me guessing at what comes next Phil, and giving the reader a new insight into the many twists and turns. As always I'm completely gripped.
this poem is breathtakingly good Jane. Your imagination as to what you are seeing in the flames of the fire took my breath away. I like how at the beginning you start with a crescendo, then at the end fades...such a perfect ending.
I know exactly how Vanessa feels, when she said: 'That sounds messy. I just get used to you as you are and then something changes.' That's how I feel about technology.
It's scary to think Vanessa will age, yet Spencer will remain young......
Ah! Bless you Di. I am so grateful to you for thinking of me at this time, it's such a blessing to hear your words of encouragement. I can't wait to get out there amongst all the nature, it's the simple things in life that are the best, and just...
The magic is really ramping up now Penny. But I agree with Martha, Perfidia was wrong to give Jon the love potion. I wonder! How Perfidia will deal with the situation...will look forward to finding out.
You're continuing to keep me
Posted on Sat, 09 Nov 2024
You're continuing to keep me guessing at what comes next Phil, and giving the reader a new insight into the many twists and turns. As always I'm completely gripped.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Who's That Girl? (Dead Reckoning series - Part 34)
I'm so sorry to hear your
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024
I'm so sorry to hear your distressing news Penny. You are in my thoughts at this time.
Take care.
Jenny.
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This is such a clever poem
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
This is such a clever poem Rhiannon. How you've managed to capture the I P in such an original way is something I would never have thought of.
Jenny.
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this poem is breathtakingly
Posted on Fri, 08 Nov 2024
this poem is breathtakingly good Jane. Your imagination as to what you are seeing in the flames of the fire took my breath away. I like how at the beginning you start with a crescendo, then at the end fades...such a perfect ending.
Very...
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I know exactly how Vanessa
Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024
I know exactly how Vanessa feels, when she said: 'That sounds messy. I just get used to you as you are and then something changes.' That's how I feel about technology.
It's scary to think Vanessa will age, yet Spencer will remain young......
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Ah! Bless you Di. I am so
Posted on Thu, 07 Nov 2024
Ah! Bless you Di. I am so grateful to you for thinking of me at this time, it's such a blessing to hear your words of encouragement. I can't wait to get out there amongst all the nature, it's the simple things in life that are the best, and just...
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Hi Paul,
Posted on Wed, 30 Oct 2024
Hi Paul,
you have a great gift for evoking supernatural and paranormal stoires in your own unique style, especially for Halloween.
This story was a pleasure to read and well deserved of Pick Of The Day.
Jenny.
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Hi Phil,
Posted on Fri, 01 Nov 2024
Hi Phil,
you've tackled the many twists and turns so well. This latest discovery was definitely a surprise.
Brilliant writing as always.
Jenny.
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Hi Penny,
Posted on Sun, 03 Nov 2024
Hi Penny,
It's lovely to be catching up with your story. It looks like Martha has been given a whole new set of worries with the appearence of Frankie.
Still loving the story and look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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The magic is really ramping
Posted on Sun, 27 Oct 2024
The magic is really ramping up now Penny. But I agree with Martha, Perfidia was wrong to give Jon the love potion. I wonder! How Perfidia will deal with the situation...will look forward to finding out.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 21
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