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The Garden, that was my domain

The garden, that was my domain It’s where I framed my worst paintings Held my rival’s head beneath the soil Until his gist went limp And hid inside a...
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Parcel for You - Part 51

Maybe he’s just better off without me, she thought as she drove back towards home, knowing in her gut that Spencer would not be by the front door...
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Already a Demon

It’s the demon drink But he was already a demon I think Five years dry now, so he says Flashing his postcards from the desert But it always looks too...
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Parcel for You - Part 50

Vanessa’s blood ran cold. The idea of Spencer in some sort of human inspired self-destruct mode filled her with dread and a deep sense of sadness. It...
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Parcel for You - Part 49

Vanessa sighed and dropped down onto the bed. She felt as if she’d had the stuffing knocked out of her as she stared at the vacant plug socket which...
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The ending was very

Posted on Sat, 17 May 2025

The ending was very unexpected and you left clever gaps for my own imagination to fill. The preachy guy was yearning to solve all the problems of the world but in the end he was satisfied with some Italian food. 

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Thank you Turlough. I'm not

Posted on Tue, 06 May 2025

Thank you Turlough. I'm not sure if I'll publish it but please don't eat your hat, there's far too much fibre in a sombrero for one stomach. 

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This is wonderful, Jenny.

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

This is wonderful, Jenny. Well deserved pick of the day and poem of the week! The idea of a crumbling folly drowning in foliage yet also supported by it and you've encapsulated the romance and free flowing nature of these period garden features...

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Thank you so much, Paul.

Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025

Thank you so much, Paul. There is an etiquette to picking, and like many manual jobs it is undervalued and classified as unskilled work. Getting so close to so many tulips surprised me too, there was something sinister growing there with them, I'...

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Ew gosh, Jenny, you've

Posted on Fri, 25 Apr 2025

Ew gosh, Jenny, you've relayed the terror, the stark contrast between feeling fully relaxed, off guard, enjoying a sunny day of adventure with your friends to suddenly feeling under threat from a predator. It's a sickening feeling that...

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Royalty among trees, they

Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025

Royalty among trees, they always make the rest look transient and they certainly have dignity, watching in silence as the world flits around them. It makes you wonder if there must be something like a soul inside them absorbing these experiences...

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Posted in Mighty Ancient Oak

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Hi Turlough, thanks for

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Hi Turlough, thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. As free as the untamed creatures, yes, my motto is you should aways keep a small portion of yourself feral, of course this can express itself in many different ways. 

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Thank you celticman. I've

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Thank you celticman. I've been feeling really sad about a couple of young men who went missing near to where I live. Both were found dead. It's unbelievably tragic and indicative of the challenges our youngsters are facing.

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Hi Jenny, earth and sky

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

Hi Jenny, earth and sky connected through rain. I never thought of it like this, the constant cycle of drawing up and then replenishing us. It's so forgiving. Thrive in radiance, they do after a good soaking. I think we need it right now. A...

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A song to hold you in time,

Posted on Wed, 19 Mar 2025

A song to hold you in time, Penny and keep the memories alive, those feelings that stirred all those years ago are still there, you just need a channel to take you back, a song or a scent. It must be both comforting and painful. I hope you are...

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