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Parcel for you..Part 26

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 17 May 2024

By the time Vanessa got back to the house she was beginning to have a niggling feeling that she might live to regret inviting Spencer into her bed...

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Parcel for you.. Part 25

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 10 May 2024

‘Oh, we might have to try and scrub that off,’ ‘Why Mum? It suits him, don’t you think it suits him?’ Vanessa stared at her daughter, she was always...

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Ratface

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 03 May 2024

It had turned out to be a beautiful sunny afternoon, a bit windy but the wind was warmer, coming from the South now, blowing a constant stream of...

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Have you ever had a pair of pants?

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 29 Apr 2024

Have you ever had a pair of pants? Underpants that is A pair that don’t wear out at all But keep their youthful looks, endure For ten or fifteen...

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Really enjoyed. I suspect

Posted on Sun, 26 May 2024

Really enjoyed. I suspect Anthony knew before his passing, even if Marta is still oblivious.

Posted in The Shadows Between Us

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This is so beautiful,

Posted on Sun, 26 May 2024

This is so beautiful, illustrating a woman's life choices through the ages, how they adjust around her physical self and the mind adapts to accept the changes. No regretting or forgetting, her fading has an element of satisfaction. She lived her...

Posted in Mariangel

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This is a suffocating read,

Posted on Wed, 22 May 2024

This is a suffocating read, something like a dream or nightmare in which you are trapped. The addition of a train only adds to the claustrophobic atmosphere and the feeling of life being out of control and bad times ahead. Look forward to the...

Posted in The 16:03 to Purgatory (Part One of Two)

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We could have done everything

Posted on Sat, 18 May 2024

We could have done everything better. Very creative with the concrete foundations of a wonderful poem.

Posted in RAAC (A concrete poem with with holes in)

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This reminds me of when I was

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

This reminds me of when I was a child visiting Llanbedr and every year when we arrived, the same man was seated on the same bench, to the point where we always looked out for him and waved. The spirit of him must still be there. It's wonderful to...

Posted in Time-out Spot

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Your powerful imagination

Posted on Wed, 15 May 2024

Your powerful imagination allows you to revisit the holiday and the waterfall whenever you want to, Jenny. I bet you remember the scent of the magical air around the waterfall. Apparently water has a memory and everything which passes the water...

Posted in Waterfall

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Those girls weren't protected

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2024

Those girls weren't protected because they were poor and very vulnerable and the perpetrators WERE protected because of their own identity. To a certain extent they still are being protected. They are referred to as a 'grooming gang' whereas...

Posted in The Rape of Britain.

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That sounds similar to some

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2024

That sounds similar to some of my dreams, Jenny. In many ways they're so much more exciting than real life and are to be appreciated. It sounds almost like you went around the world. Some people say that the faces you see in your dreams are...

Posted in Complex Dream

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I enjoyed the way you

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2024

I enjoyed the way you describe the branches as outstretched and welcoming of all. A tree holds no prejudice and they're such generous spirits but beautiful too, what more could you ask? We are planning to have a lovely mature cedar removed...

Posted in Connecting With Trees

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All this technology which is

Posted on Thu, 02 May 2024

All this technology which is supposed to make life easy is leaving us incredibly vulnerable. There's something comforting about vinyl, you can hold it like a photograph and money too. The replacement of the physical with the virtual makes us feel...