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The Broken Lady

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 12 Jul 2024

She doesn’t move The broken lady At least when the mortals are passing She may contemplate much From the bounds of her post She’s more than the...
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Parcel for you...Part 28

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 05 Jul 2024

There was a sense of restored peace with Annie having left the house to stay with her father for a while. Vanessa placed all that young lady’s things...
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This Rose Garden

By Jane Hyphen on Thu, 27 Jun 2024

You’re so lucky To be in this rose garden To observe the scale of colours Draw the octave of scents Into your lungs To squeeze the petals hard Inside...
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Peter's Soul

By Jane Hyphen on Tue, 11 Jun 2024

The door was thick, four or five inches perhaps and made from iron. It felt very warm, hot even, hand hot, you could touch it but you wouldn’t want...
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Parcel for you....Part 27

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 07 Jun 2024

Vanessa laughed. It was late and she was too tired for anger to surface but vulnerable to silly exhausted giggles. The insinuation was absurd and if...
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This is so clever, Rhiannon,

Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024

This is so clever, Rhiannon, the idea of a ballroom dress upon the dancefloor of their huge leaves. You've got Begonias spot on and they don't get tired either, do they. 

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Now I too would enjoy camping

Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

Now I too would enjoy camping if all those comforts were on offer in the blink of an eye. Dolls coming to life though, that's most people's worst nightmare. There are so many unhindered imaginative elements in here.

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This is wonderful. The way

Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024

This is wonderful. The way you've described the sights, sounds, atmosphere. I was simply teleported to the scene. Magical and one to return to.

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Terrifying isn't it, Maxine.

Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024

Terrifying isn't it, Maxine. A national health crisis. This will be news for a week or two and then forgotten. For me it raises bigger questions about the sophistication of the crime and how a young man reaches this point. Poor father and older...

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That was simply a unique read

Posted on Wed, 10 Jul 2024

That was simply a unique read, nothing predictable, more like a verbal collage using so many materials from different sources to create a thought provoking piece of art. I always found Midsummer Night's dream sort of trippy, I enjoyed how you've...

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You paint the atmosphere of

Posted on Fri, 05 Jul 2024

You paint the atmosphere of the afternoon pub culture so well, the music and laid back jovial haze of the place, half-hearted football and muffled conservation. Part of me thinks those days are gone, I hope they survive in some corners. The meat-...

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That's quite interesting. I

Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2024

That's quite interesting. I suppose here in the UK, the weather is so changeable that sometimes the conditions create a perfect storn of sychronised pollination, all the grass going to seed at once for example. I've never been to Pakistan but I...

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When I think of DIY, I want

Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024

When I think of DIY, I want to take a big nap. Yes, I'm with you there and many other things too. The thought of it so draining for the soul. This is relatable and entertaining too.

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That was a fascinating read

Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024

That was a fascinating read with lots of different elements. I have never experienced this first hand although my brother did this to his family and one of the things which surprised me the most was the way our mother forgave him (her son) pretty...

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Sublime and so finely written

Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024

Sublime and so finely written. Wonderful to read on a sunny afternoon.

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