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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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The Legend of the Pah - 1 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘A vasectomy is the best gift a man can give to his wife…..Alistair, Alistair!’ ‘What?’ He said, without lifting his head. A spread of nails lay...
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The Wasted Wish
‘Go and shut up the chickens for the night, Mai, and when you get back your tea will be ready.’ Mai didn’t like shutting up the chickens by herself...
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Don't Look at the Sheikh
‘A small number of you have been selected to work in the VIP tent. This is a very important location and you will be representing the college,...
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I really enjoyed this poem,
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.
Read full commentPosted in Looking For God In The Woods
I enjoyed this poetic take on
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...
Read full commentPosted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)
Anemone, what a beautiful
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment.
Read full commentPosted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two
I love this. The picture you
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
I love this. The picture you've painted is beautiful and pure escapism. Yes I do believe. I was once lucky enough to see a tiny tiny man, not a fairy, well not winged anyway. I was a small child but I know what I saw. I've written about it on...
Read full commentPosted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part One
Beautiful lines for the
Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022
Beautiful lines for the season Rhiannon. I haven't seen any celandines yet but lots of aconites out here with their little collars and of course all the primroses and daffodils blowing their trumpets, 'heralding the coming spring'. Perfect.
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Love this, so unique. In the
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022
Love this, so unique. In the end there is always a new way to create but I can't help thinking of that ear, all half-pecked and covered in dirt.
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Thank you so much L for
Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022
Thank you so much L for reading and commenting. I had to go back (far back) in time to find this voice and remember how much I wanted to resist everything than comes with becoming a woman. It didn't help having male relatives who were...
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Thanks for the cherries
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry
This is sweet and sour. I
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
This is sweet and sour. I enjoyed the descriptions of Cornwall here, so well done, especially the Hottentot Fig, once you learn that plant name, you never forget it. The energy and fearlessness of youth quickly expires but it sounds like your...
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Wow, this is really sweet and
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
Wow, this is really sweet and touching. The lady in the photograph looks so happy. Music can be a medium for time travel. She must have so many wonderful memories.
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