Jane Hyphen
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| Story | At last – Moving! (IP) | Rhiannonw | 17 | 8 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Gnawing loneliness | TonyC25 | 7 | 8 years 7 months ago |
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| Story | Evening Song | Rhiannonw | 11 | 8 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Silva in Lisbon | Jane Hyphen | 15 | 8 years 8 months ago |
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| Story | My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales. | love_writing | 20 | 8 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Grow up or give up. | london_calling79 | 13 | 8 years 8 months ago |
| Story | relapse prevention therapy | celticman | 32 | 8 years 8 months ago |
| Story | Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London | Ray Schaufeld | 14 | 8 years 8 months ago |
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| Story | The End is Nigh | Jane Hyphen | 2 | 8 years 9 months ago |
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| Story | Sixty Six | Jane Hyphen | 5 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | we's the real | culturehero | 2 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Mynydd Troed | Rhiannonw | 17 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Moss | Rhiannonw | 23 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | How long is high? | Rhiannonw | 13 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Creature Comforts Part Five | skinner_jennifer | 12 | 8 years 9 months ago |
| Story | Ol' Yeller | randy-johnson | 4 | 8 years 10 months ago |
| Story | All Smoke And No Mirrors | Jane Hyphen | 16 | 8 years 10 months ago |






I enjoyed the way the grass
Posted on Sun, 28 Jul 2019
I enjoyed the way the grass stalks run like threads through this poem and the way it highlights the complexities in nature which we take for granted every moment. Those black beetles appear this time of year don't they, incongruously huge and...
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Hi, thank you for your
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2019
Hi, thank you for your comment onemore. There is so much inspiration you can take from travellers in all their forms, the transport and all the etiquette and frustration.
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You are categorically granite
Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2019
You are categorically granite celticman.
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It truly is amazing isn't it
Posted on Tue, 18 Jun 2019
It truly is amazing isn't it Rhiannon. The butterfly life cycle and all those eels toing and froing to the Sargasso sea back to the Thames, the mind boggles. 'Some things beyond comprehension lie' for sure and the more we find out the more...
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This is so atmospheric,
Posted on Tue, 11 Jun 2019
This is so atmospheric, mostly grey in colour like all your writing but this isn't bleak, it has fresh air and the edges of nature hardening the characters. It would make a wonderful play but it's wonderful to read too. Full of clever phrases...
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Wow, this is really
Posted on Tue, 04 Jun 2019
Wow, this is really terrifying like a nightmare. It reminds me of The Pied Piper of Hamlyn but perhaps much worse because of the reality of our environment and the possibility of irreversible change. Trains and stations with young children are...
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Lovely piece Rhiannon. I
Posted on Thu, 23 May 2019
Lovely piece Rhiannon. I enjoyed the way you describe their beauty in yellow shades and also how you point out that they serve as a warning to the water's edge often hidden, I'd never thought of them like that. They are a very classy plant.
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I enjoyed the intertwining of
Posted on Mon, 20 May 2019
I enjoyed the intertwining of the natural and the supernatural here Jenny and you've included so many elements from stars in the sky to the underwater plant life. The result is dreamy and full of magic.
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Really enjoyed this stand
Posted on Wed, 15 May 2019
Really enjoyed this stand-alone quirkdom. The uses of a potato know no bounds, it's no wonder the swan wanted to pass itself off as one.
Read full commentPosted in The Identity of the Potato and the Swan
As others have said the first
Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019
As others have said the first verse is a perfect accolade to these woodland beauties and then you use them as an example of what could be lost. The rich won't share, there is evidence of that all around us and so much of our natural resources is...
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