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1117 of my comments have received 1222 Great Feedback votes

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Wow - great video!  I really

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Wow - great video!  I really enjoyed this, Linda.  Lovely rhythm and sense of fun.  I hope Carnival goes brilliantly this weekend.

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I really like the play on

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2016

I really like the play on words and the way you describe that overwhelming pull of attraction, even when it is 'wrong'. 

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Very well paced, packed full

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2016

Very well paced, packed full of information but not overloading the reader.  Particularly like the way the dialogue develops and gives insight into the characters. 

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This is great - the sense of

Posted on Fri, 19 Aug 2016

This is great - the sense of unease is beautifully maintained, with Weasley giving the reader shudders and our concern for Kit growing all the time.  Excellent cliffhanger ending.  Please do keep posting more of this, it's so good.   

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Nice start to this.  I like

Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016

Nice start to this.  I like the characters and the questions raised by the arrival of the 'cursed' ship.  The set up really holds together. 

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This brilliant poem is our

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

This brilliant poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!  Please share/retweet!

Picture credit   http://tinyurl.com/jdgso9u

 

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Not remotely a bit rubbish,

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016

Not remotely a bit rubbish, but it does feel as though the ideas come tumbling out, and much better that way than the other.  In the end we all write for ourselves, or we should, because otherwise it isn't our true voice.  You have it harder than...

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Hello!  Welcome to ABC Tales.

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016

Hello!  Welcome to ABC Tales.  I very much liked the rhythm of this, and the contrast between the sound that seemed to be soothing and then became so frightening.  It felt like part of something longer - have you got any plans to expand it? ...

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Lots of strange and

Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2016

Lots of strange and fantastical things here, with a fluidity between dreams and reality.  I was wondering if it might help with the pacing if you used the dialogue to push the story forward - eg if, in the conversation between the narrator and...

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Hello!  I enjoyed this very

Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2016

Hello!  I enjoyed this very much.  Beautifully constructed, and some lovely strong phrases like 'the yoghurty morning light'.  A mysterious and unsettling atmosphere with underlying humour.  A rewarding read.

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