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1063 of my comments have received 1157 Great Feedback votes

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I wasn't too sure about this

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2016

I wasn't too sure about this when it started, but the details of the pool hall and the game were fascinating and really carried me along.  I'm not too sure about the ending.  I liked the way you set it up as 'old guy meets his young nemesis' and...

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It does sound  easy, but it

Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2016

It does sound  easy, but it never is.  Loved the line 'The stretcher bearers are silently carrying the dead away. Reason lost another battle last night.'  I hope the narrator finds a way through.

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I really like the way this

Posted on Mon, 29 Aug 2016

I really like the way this explodes the popular view that people on the autistic spectrum 'don't feel' - to begin to understand how  or what they feel needs others to consider a totally different way of seeing the world.  The lack of support...

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Wow - great video!  I really

Posted on Thu, 25 Aug 2016

Wow - great video!  I really enjoyed this, Linda.  Lovely rhythm and sense of fun.  I hope Carnival goes brilliantly this weekend.

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I really like the play on

Posted on Tue, 23 Aug 2016

I really like the play on words and the way you describe that overwhelming pull of attraction, even when it is 'wrong'. 

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Very well paced, packed full

Posted on Sun, 21 Aug 2016

Very well paced, packed full of information but not overloading the reader.  Particularly like the way the dialogue develops and gives insight into the characters. 

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Posted in The Crimson Wake iv plans are made.

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This is great - the sense of

Posted on Fri, 19 Aug 2016

This is great - the sense of unease is beautifully maintained, with Weasley giving the reader shudders and our concern for Kit growing all the time.  Excellent cliffhanger ending.  Please do keep posting more of this, it's so good.   

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Nice start to this.  I like

Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016

Nice start to this.  I like the characters and the questions raised by the arrival of the 'cursed' ship.  The set up really holds together. 

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This brilliant poem is our

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

This brilliant poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day!  Please share/retweet!

Picture credit   http://tinyurl.com/jdgso9u

 

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Not remotely a bit rubbish,

Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016

Not remotely a bit rubbish, but it does feel as though the ideas come tumbling out, and much better that way than the other.  In the end we all write for ourselves, or we should, because otherwise it isn't our true voice.  You have it harder than...

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