2 of my comments have received 2 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Thu, 07 Jun 2018
Well done, Scorpio.
The second and subsequent parts of stories can sometimes be a little disappointing, but not this; it's even more polished than part one.
I've only one suggestion. I think it was the practice in the seventeeth...Read full comment
Posted in The Devil's Surgeon Part 2
Posted on Tue, 05 Jun 2018
A very skilful narrative hook, Scorpio.
Two points, if I may. While most of the piece seems written in authentic seventeenth-century diction, the sentence fragment, 'Really, really deep', struck me as a little too modern. Also, since the...Read full comment
Posted in The Devil's Surgeon Part 1