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Time to ponder on woman kind like garden's fresh raw beauty, blooming both inside and out. When wisdom of years shall feel the earth and rain quench...
what a great trip out. I just love castles, but haven't been to one since Warwick Castle many years ago. The castle ruins in your photo look so impressive. I know Wales has many, but I've never been to any.
I think you've done a brilliant job at pulling Jeannie's back story together. Poor woman being raped by her grandfather is horrifying. Everything adds up now. I wonder! If Precious will change her ways.
it's getting really exciting with all the unanswered questions flying around. Now I'm wondering who is at the front door. Keep going Penny, loving the suspense.
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read your school life history. It seems you moved around a lot, it must have been unsettling, but I suppose you were used to it.
When my granddad was ill, we stayed with my gran for quite a few months...
I love how you're keeping the plot going Jane. It can go in so many directions. Cedric is a great new character too, that I'm sure will add to the story.
This is so dreamy to read. I
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
This is so dreamy to read. I especially love that second stanza. Beautifully done Penny.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Deep in the Land of REM
Status plays a big part in
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2025
Status plays a big part in school life. Trouble is when leaving, that position doesn't go with you.
Teenagers go one of two ways, either firm and determined, or irresolute.
You make some valid points in this story Jane, of which I...
Read full commentPosted in Nicola's Privilege
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
Hi Rhiannon,
what a great trip out. I just love castles, but haven't been to one since Warwick Castle many years ago. The castle ruins in your photo look so impressive. I know Wales has many, but I've never been to any.
These...
Read full commentPosted in Above the Teme and Ludlow
Hi Phil,
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
Hi Phil,
I think you've done a brilliant job at pulling Jeannie's back story together. Poor woman being raped by her grandfather is horrifying. Everything adds up now. I wonder! If Precious will change her ways.
I'm sorry to see the...
Read full commentPosted in Family Affair (Dead Reckoning series - Part 49)
You've conjured so many vivid
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2025
You've conjured so many vivid memories Turlough. Was Foxwood an all boys school? Only no girls were mentioned.
The turmoil of cross country running sounded horrendous. I hated all sports at school. The teachers were proper dictaters, just...
Read full commentPosted in The Sogginess of the Long-Distance Runner
Spencer seems to be in better
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2025
Spencer seems to be in better control of the situation than Vanessa, even though he's been tampered with.
Can't wait to find out more about Cedric, he seems a bit eccentric, which makes the story more tense, not knowing how he might act...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 53
it's getting really exciting
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2025
it's getting really exciting with all the unanswered questions flying around. Now I'm wondering who is at the front door. Keep going Penny, loving the suspense.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in 'Willow's Missing Tail" 25
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read
Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2025
Hi Rhiannon, It was so interesting to read your school life history. It seems you moved around a lot, it must have been unsettling, but I suppose you were used to it.
When my granddad was ill, we stayed with my gran for quite a few months...
Read full commentPosted in Five schools
Hi Rhiannon,
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
Hi Rhiannon,
you capture this February weather with your poem. Love the idea of:
Frosty clear,
blue, blue day - sky
Sparkling night:
warm clothing,
That gives me a hospitable feeling, with my love of the...
Read full commentPosted in February Variety
I love how you're keeping the
Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2025
I love how you're keeping the plot going Jane. It can go in so many directions. Cedric is a great new character too, that I'm sure will add to the story.
Loving reading and look forward to next part.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you - Part 52
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