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StoryWalk With You jennifer71 year 4 months ago
StoryThe winter of the frogs queen beatle41 year 4 months ago
StoryAbsolution jennifer21 year 5 months ago
CollectionHurricane Warning (2025) jennifer01 year 5 months ago
StoryThe Mulberry Bush Stickleback11 year 7 months ago
StoryMad Girl’s Heart Song jennifer81 year 7 months ago
StoryAnxiety Rules jennifer171 year 7 months ago
StoryGrowing Up - Competition Entry Caldwell31 year 8 months ago
StoryButterflies jennifer51 year 8 months ago
StoryThe Crow jennifer21 year 10 months ago
StoryBleeding Rainbows jennifer71 year 10 months ago
StoryLeonard & Co-hen Ewan31 year 10 months ago
StoryTiredness (A Sonnet of Sorts!) jennifer31 year 10 months ago
StoryAnother Art (Villanelle-esque!) jennifer01 year 10 months ago
StoryWatching jennifer81 year 10 months ago
StoryPoppies jennifer81 year 10 months ago
StoryLast Train jennifer191 year 11 months ago
StoryMemento Mori celticman241 year 11 months ago
StoryThe Red Kite (bird of prey) socialeaf182 years 2 months ago
StorySuperstition jennifer82 years 2 months ago
StoryUnsaid (A Villanelle-ish) jennifer82 years 3 months ago
StoryTilly cut loose from the day celticman212 years 3 months ago
StoryTitterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24 Rhiannonw102 years 3 months ago
StoryThe Magic of the Wood skinner_jennifer22 years 4 months ago
StoryThe Mole (A Sonnet) jennifer72 years 4 months ago

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Cherry

Time

By jennifer on Tue, 23 Dec 2025

Time Jennifer Pickup, 23.12.2025 Time will not wait, Does not love or hate, Shows not neglect or care, Has no reason to be fair. Time ebbs and flows...
Love
Poem
Certificate PG
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Cherry

Pray

By jennifer on Mon, 27 Oct 2025

Pray Jennifer Pickup, 27.10.2025 for 11.11.2025 Pray for the fallen, and pray for the brave, Pray for the lives that they managed to save, Pray for...
Spiritual
Poem
Certificate PG
Cherry

Snake

By jennifer on Wed, 22 Oct 2025

Snake Jennifer Pickup, 22.10.2025 There is a snake, here in the grass, A friendly snake, it smiles and laughs - With skin as smooth as silken thread...
Autobiography
Poem
Certificate PG
Cherry

Warning

By jennifer on Wed, 14 May 2025

Warning Jennifer Pickup, 14.05.2025 The best things are intangible Those precious things We can’t see or touch Money can’t buy the best things Those...
Philosophy
Poem
Certificate U
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Cherry

Lucky in Love

By jennifer on Thu, 01 May 2025

Lucky in Love Jennifer Pickup, 01.05.2025 Touch wood Bless you Crossed fingers Is it true? Find the pot of Rainbow gold A legend Something old Throw...
Love
Poem
Certificate U

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14 of my comments have received 15 Great Feedback votes

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This line,'Counting out an

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008

This line,

'Counting out an abacus
of small conceits'

is just perfect.

As ever, I am going to ask for punctuation all through - your use of it and capitals is rather sporadic, I feel!

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Posted in The Mulberry Bush

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Great poem, but I feel the

Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2010

Great poem, but I feel the word 'invigorates' doesn't fit - it makes the line have too many syllables and throws the rhythm, which is otherwise pretty uniform, off. How about finding another word that means the same thing but has fewer syllables? J...Read full comment

Posted in Sun's role

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Mad, exhausting,

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2009

Mad, exhausting, intense! You captured such a crazy feeling! Once again, just the 'it's' to point out, Yes, keep writing! J xRead full comment

Posted in Lost in New York - Pt II

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'the rain battered box gift

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008

'the rain battered box gift wrapped' such a vivid image of the coffin. This is minimalistic, and yet says it all. And for once, I think the lack of puncatuation adds to that.Read full comment

Posted in One Driver Escaped Uninjured

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