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StoryTiredness (A Sonnet of Sorts!) jennifer31 year 3 weeks ago
StoryAnother Art (Villanelle-esque!) jennifer01 year 1 month ago
StoryWatching jennifer81 year 1 month ago
StoryPoppies jennifer81 year 1 month ago
StoryLast Train jennifer191 year 1 month ago
StoryMemento Mori celticman241 year 2 months ago
StoryThe Red Kite (bird of prey) socialeaf181 year 5 months ago
StorySuperstition jennifer81 year 5 months ago
StoryUnsaid (A Villanelle-ish) jennifer81 year 6 months ago
StoryTilly cut loose from the day celticman211 year 6 months ago
StoryTitterstone Clee (533m)16/02/24 Rhiannonw101 year 6 months ago
StoryThe Magic of the Wood skinner_jennifer21 year 6 months ago
StoryThe Mole (A Sonnet) jennifer71 year 7 months ago
StoryNew Year's Resolution jennifer151 year 8 months ago
StorySpider jennifer41 year 9 months ago
StorySing (for 11.11.2023) jennifer41 year 9 months ago
Storyperspective jennifer31 year 12 months ago
StoryThe lies we tell our children jennifer62 years 18 hours ago
CollectionStorm on the Horizon (2023-2024) jennifer02 years 1 day ago
StoryWolves jennifer62 years 3 weeks ago
StoryTime Piece of You jennifer62 years 3 months ago
StoryStill Present jennifer12 years 5 months ago
StoryStars on Fire jennifer112 years 8 months ago
StoryThe Colours jennifer42 years 10 months ago
StoryLegacy Ciadish82 years 10 months ago

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House of Cards

House of Cards Jennifer Pickup, 28.01.2025 As the storm winds blow, and the waters rise, My heart sinks down, and I shutter my eyes – I wait for...
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Absolution

Absolution Jennifer Pickup, 01.01.2025 This year I will not make any resolution Simply to fail at it in the execution, For my vices I do not seek a...
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Mad Girl’s Heart Song

Mad Girl’s Heart Song (A Villanelle, based on Sylvia Plath’s ‘Mad Girl’s Love Song’) Jennifer Pickup, 26.09.2024 for World Mental Health Day 10.10...
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Butterflies

Butterflies Jennifer Pickup, 16.09.2024 Another warm September day – I watch the mourners make their way Into the building of goodbyes, With...
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The Crow

The Crow Jennifer Pickup, 17.08.2024 I am the crow and I fly Fast as a dart, and straight as a die, Observing the world with my watchful eye. I see...

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13 of my comments have received 14 Great Feedback votes

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Great poem, but I feel the

Posted on Wed, 16 Jun 2010

Great poem, but I feel the word 'invigorates' doesn't fit - it makes the line have too many syllables and throws the rhythm, which is otherwise pretty uniform, off. How about finding another word that means the same thing but has fewer syllables? J...Read full comment

Posted in Sun's role

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Mad, exhausting,

Posted on Tue, 10 Mar 2009

Mad, exhausting, intense! You captured such a crazy feeling! Once again, just the 'it's' to point out, Yes, keep writing! J xRead full comment

Posted in Lost in New York - Pt II

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'the rain battered box gift

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008

'the rain battered box gift wrapped' such a vivid image of the coffin. This is minimalistic, and yet says it all. And for once, I think the lack of puncatuation adds to that.Read full comment

Posted in One Driver Escaped Uninjured

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