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Warning

Warning Jennifer Pickup, 14.05.2025 The best things are intangible Those precious things We can’t see or touch Money can’t buy the best things Those...
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Lucky in Love

Lucky in Love Jennifer Pickup, 01.05.2025 Touch wood Bless you Crossed fingers Is it true? Find the pot of Rainbow gold A legend Something old Throw...
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American Pie

American Pie (Edited Version) Jennifer Pickup, 17.04.2025 Four decades plus since I first heard those piano chords behind the opening words, and that...
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Best Laid Plans

Best Laid Plans (for Valentine’s Day) Jennifer Pickup, 11.02.2025 Is it time yet to take down all your pictures from the wall? Am I ready to admit...
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Red Door

Red Door Jennifer Pickup, 03.02.2025 I heard the news today, It made my heart beat sore. I took your record out to play Only a night or two before...
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13 of my comments have received 14 Great Feedback votes

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It's always a dangerous thing...

Posted on Thu, 09 Jan 2025

....to ask what someone else is thinking.

You may not like the answer. Sometimes it's best not to know!

I love a sonnet, and this one is so atmospheric.

'taking his silence as separation' - Yes, this line! So well...

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Posted in Sonnet in Silence

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This has echoes of...

Posted on Sat, 07 Dec 2024

...so many things. But I'm getting 'Wuthering Heights' vibes.

How wonderfully atmospheric. 

'breath like intense tempest' - love this line, both the imagery and the sound of it when read aloud, the rise and fall of the words....

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Posted in Stormy Night Of Passion

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So true!

Posted on Thu, 10 Oct 2024

I've written four villanelles now - this one most recently, one called 'Another Art' in July this year inspired by ‘One Art’ by Elizabeth Bishop, 'Unsaid' in February this year (not sure of the inspiration, think I just based it loosely on the...

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Posted in Mad Girl’s Heart Song

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So glad...

Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024

...I'm not the only one that does this. 

Love the final stanza.

J x

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Posted in Leonard & Co-hen

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Thank you!

Posted on Mon, 17 Jun 2024

The train metaphor comes from my dad being a steam train enthusiast - throughout my childhood, we spent countless hours as a family riding on steam trains, exploring steam musems, going to model railway exhibits, and train spotting! The family...

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Posted in Last Train

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Wonderful!

Posted on Fri, 05 Apr 2024

The imagery is so evocative, how beautifully done!

Saw a pair the other day - spectacular!

J x

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Posted in The Red Kite (bird of prey)

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True!

Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024

The poem does admit that at the end, though! 

J x

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Posted in Superstition

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First time...

Posted on Tue, 10 Oct 2023

...that I've written about this. Hardest poem I've ever written, it took me nearly two weeks on and off, and weirdly I finished it on World Mental Health Day, which I'll be honest I didn't even know existed until it popped up on an NHS campaign...

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Posted in Anxiety Rules

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Wow!

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2023

Thank you - what an honour!

It was hugely enjoyable and challenging to write - not just understanding and then following the structure of the poetic form, but addressing the subject matter. Personal and yet also the experience of others,...

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Posted in Wolves

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This line,'Counting out an

Posted on Wed, 25 Jun 2008

This line,

'Counting out an abacus
of small conceits'

is just perfect.

As ever, I am going to ask for punctuation all through - your use of it and capitals is rather sporadic, I feel!

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Posted in The Mulberry Bush

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