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1592 of my comments have received 1618 Great Feedback votes

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I can touch and feel the

Posted on Fri, 15 Dec 2023

I can touch and feel the transition from robot to human, at least in the shift in feeling towards Spencer. intrigued as to where you take that. Happy or sad. Keep going, Jane...

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A lovely story, so well told.

Posted on Sun, 10 Dec 2023

A lovely story, so well told. Perfect for Christmas. Paul :)

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"And that little ship is

Posted on Sun, 10 Dec 2023

"And that little ship is ourselves,
entire, enfolding all that’s gone.."

What a beautiful poem and the sentiments resonate with me completely.

I get it.

Just gorgeous. Paul

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"..Or I choke on foetid

Posted on Mon, 11 Dec 2023

"..Or I choke on foetid brumal dank

Give me daylight or I’ll scream!"

That's an evocative, powerful piece (the pic is quite terrifying).

Well deserved accolades, Turlough. Paul

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"...past the munching sheep..

Posted on Wed, 13 Dec 2023

"...past the munching sheep.."

Another enjoyable ramble with you, Rhiannon. Felt like I was there. Paul :)

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A beautiful poem. Life

Posted on Thu, 14 Dec 2023

A beautiful poem. Life affirming. Wishing you and your family a wonderful Christmas, Jean. Keep the updates coming, of course. Take care. Paul x

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"... weaving flutes and

Posted on Tue, 12 Dec 2023

"... weaving flutes and whispering December breezes..."

 

I like the contrast between the madness on the roads and the serenity you seek. Some nice expressions in here. Very lovely, Jenny :) 

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"A dropped twig,

Posted on Tue, 12 Dec 2023

"A dropped twig,

beautifully clothed with

light grey lichen - "

Such an evocative opening and some lovely imagery. I could see the leaf carpet. Beautiful vignette, Rhiannon. Paul

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Spencer's fear of mum made me

Posted on Fri, 08 Dec 2023

Spencer's fear of mum made me laugh. All internal threat indicators going off. (That used to happen to me with my mother-in-law. Escape was impossible)

Keep going with this Jane. It's building into something special :)

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"I’m not sure now, where you

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2023

"I’m not sure now, where you begin and end"

That's a philosophical introspection full of poetic musings. Certainly evocative conjuring interesting images. Maybe our home isn't always a metaphorical castle when you wonder what's going on...

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