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1515 of my comments have received 1532 Great Feedback votes

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"On a long walk I found the

Posted on Tue, 26 Sep 2023

"On a long walk I found the sea

Blinding and expansive.."

Beautiful imagery, for sure. An exposition filled with metaphors. The poem felt stoical yet sanguine. Enjoyed. Paul

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Loneliness is supposedly a

Posted on Sat, 23 Sep 2023

Loneliness is supposedly a plague of the 21st century for various reasons. You are right that you can still be alone when surrounded by many others. Of course, ultimately, we are all alone inside our heads. We come into the world alone and we...

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"Thunder booming like an

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

"Thunder booming like an

angry predator,"

 

A tempest of a diary entry, Jenny. Enjoyed the electrically charged words. Paul :)

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"The sea is vast.

Posted on Thu, 21 Sep 2023

"The sea is vast.
Wave crests rush in,"

 

A scene set so evocatively and then the rest of the poem rolls in like a picturebook tide. Beautiful photo too. Lovely work, Rhiannon. Paul

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"Dark like night is dark,

Posted on Fri, 15 Sep 2023

"Dark like night is dark,
Like pain."

Your poetry is invariably dark and unique. Images conjured with a cold precision. Enjoyed, of course. Paul

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"Jam on toast

Posted on Thu, 14 Sep 2023

"Jam on toast
like it, lick it..."

You conjur up quite an image in so few words. Nicely done, Rhiannon! Paul :)

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"As Autumn turns to Winter's

Posted on Mon, 04 Sep 2023

"As Autumn turns to Winter's chill,

forest hunger draws us where fallen

dead leaves scrunch beneath boots."

 

Atmospheric and evocative. Enjoyed, Jenny. Paul

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"Little fly that flits around

Posted on Mon, 11 Sep 2023

"Little fly that flits around
bumps into a web and bound.."

Spider's webs are a marvel of nature, aren't they? Remarkably strong. I enjoyed this, Rhiannon. Very nicely done. Paul

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"..so calm...sanctuary

Posted on Tue, 12 Sep 2023

"..so calm...sanctuary

meandering with

enchantment;"

 

Moments of calm and beauty. Nicely done, Jenny (and a lovely photo) :)

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I love the sound of rain. You

Posted on Sat, 02 Sep 2023

I love the sound of rain. You have conjured wonderful imagery here, Rhiannon. A lovely IP response. Paul :) 

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