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Blood is thicker than water
Rain splatters the pavement when I set out. My sister, Teresa, doesn’t live far, but then the moon isn’t that far, and I don’t particularly want to...
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A song for Europe 2
Cry off negotiation Cut up small Snatch a breath Will she-won’t he? Luck of the draw Those who survive Those who died Word of mouth Mouth on mouth...
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Plot without a story
The note flapped through the letterbox and lay on the linoleum. I pulled open the door, just in time to see a denimed back sauntering up the street...
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No Good Reason to be Chicken
Madame Cheekie was a hen’s kind of hen, no clucking about, her hooded eyes darkened and she’d just tell you how it was, or should be, which was the...
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A Song For Europe - Part 1.
State who we are No applause No stars Just another act For a moment –egalitie Rejects and fallen Fraternite of nobody Pray God Faith on its knees The...
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I saw this documetary ahd she
Posted on Sat, 23 Feb 2019
I saw this documetary ahd she was indeed brilliant but troubled. Dying in the bath, well that about sums it up. And to also happen to her daughter...
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wiser because they need to be
Posted on Thu, 21 Feb 2019
wiser because they need to be.
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you caught it, the joy of not
Posted on Wed, 20 Feb 2019
you caught it, the joy of not being joyful or in love, but moping along in Paris, hoping the city will work it's magic and make their life better. Well done.
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a pyramid of selves go on
Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019
a pyramid of selves go on every expediton. Interesting.
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this is great. Charlie and
Posted on Thu, 07 Feb 2019
this is great. Charlie and Eliza are so sweet and believeable.
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brialliant. Everythng is
Posted on Wed, 06 Feb 2019
brialliant. Everythng is there in front and behind the reader and Chantelle is someone we know so well, without having to look up from the screen. My only qualm is stick in a litte nudge to the reader that it's a minibus and not a car the...
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keep costs to a minimum,
Posted on Fri, 01 Feb 2019
keep costs to a minimum, drive labour costs down and the labour force to work harder and harder. Run a monopoloy that's not a monopoly. Make vast profits that are not profits. Yes. meet Amazon. Nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in Pontius (Ch.15): Part 1
nothing changes, steal from
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
nothing changes, steal from the poor to give to the rich. 2019 to 1979. Thatcher/Reagan.
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under the nod - great term,
Posted on Wed, 30 Jan 2019
under the nod - great term, sums up so much. Great story, keep moving. Storey is the British spelling for housing. You've got story, if that's American English that's fine. Otherwise, have another look.
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I'd ditch the first 3
Posted on Tue, 29 Jan 2019
I'd ditch the first 3 paragrapsh, but the rest is the walk of life. yeh, I found it funny my mate's dad like Dire Straits. Dirge I thought. But I was never into music. Brooksy made of glass. Doomed. Dire, I know, but brilliant.
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