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Peachy pictures
Told to sort through my things. You were funny, born nearer to the Sex Pistols with their purple Mohican hairdos, their zips and spits and fuck you,...
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CAPABILITY FOR WORK
Medical training costs one million To produce the right kind of thumb Upside down –you are all right son Shave a billionth of our tax penury Arbeit...
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how to be stupid
Reading is the engine of writing. Tune up. Breathe in the perfume of words and phrases. Become familiar with ignorance. Recognise it in yourself...
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dread-nought
Phrases orphaned and read cramming inside my head conversations of sounds drowning, clowning around silence of the heart dual rhythm apart...
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standing in the queue to order a word kebab at my local takeaway
What would you like? Voice of division Voice of derision Vice setting tone Garnish with that? Waiting for a letter to arrive Swirly bluebottle battle...
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nice eyes don't grow old they
Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017
nice eyes don't grow old they just lose a bit of twinkle.
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where are our friends,.
Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017
where are our friends,. indeed?
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nicely done. grown-ups are
Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2017
nicely done. grown-ups are weird. That's why I refuse to grow up.
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nice rhyme for halloween is
Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017
nice rhyme for halloween is ghostly time.
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I guess with hpyerbole and
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017
I guess with hpyerbole and hyperreality sometimes we forget we're not always right.
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the sun brings its own
Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017
the sun brings its own medicine and this seems ancient and modern. The phrase, 'for wounded, beyond make mend' is slightly clumsy. I know what you mean, but simpler with 'beyond mend'.
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trays were our sleighs
Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2017
trays were our sleighs
puss-in-boot style boots [too many boots. reword eg footware.
I'm not sure faces would be little, when you're little. Take out the uncertainties. eg, [perhaps with] a little ethnic design.
two-and-a-...
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the girls ruptured nose [girl
Posted on Sat, 30 Sep 2017
the girls ruptured nose [girl's]
her left leg juddered in a spasm, then with a slow exhale,
the pretty girl died. [formatting error here, but perhaps not in your text]
wonderful scene setting and writing.
Read full commentPosted in The girl with the Maroon lipstick (excerpt from Eagles Hunt Wolves)
stolent moments can be sweet.
Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017
stolent moments can be sweet.
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yep, often wonder how women
Posted on Sat, 16 Sep 2017
yep, often wonder how women walk on those heels. heads in the clouds
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