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you get what not
Jo warned me, twice, ‘behave yourself’. But she didn’t trust me. Bundled me out the front door, and shoved me down the steps to make sure I got the...
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longest day
Everything different. Everything the same. Room minging of dampness. His bed and mine. I was convalescing after some long illness. I couldn’t...
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Shadow
Dan’s birthday. Their bedroom stinks of stale fag smoke, booze and the acrid burn of hash. After giving him his present, and another kind of treat,...
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uncorrected proof two.
Woke up this morning, start the day with a prayer that my van will kick-over. It’s an Escort, underneath the grime, the faded red insignia of the...
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Lodestone
“Woke Up This Morning” All sparse littered landmarks gone. All sparse littered landmarks grown. Trudging among missing standing stones. Trudging...
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yeh, I get it, but someone
Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014
yeh, I get it, but someone stole it off me.
It's something the Asian students do TO WORN...think you missed out a few words here.
great story. true to life (and I'm not a great fan of Virginia Woolf either).
Read full commentPosted in I have no sympathy
No one is stopping you. Write
Posted on Wed, 10 Sep 2014
No one is stopping you. Write and be wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in I Hate Being 19!
Nothing is something and this
Posted on Thu, 04 Sep 2014
Nothing is something and this is dazzling.
Read full commentPosted in After Death
Geoff seemed like one of the
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
Geoff seemed like one of the good guys. Yet he get's done over as a bad guy. Great volte and twist at the end. Great story.
Read full commentPosted in Four doors down
the rain, the clouds, the cry
Posted on Wed, 20 Aug 2014
the rain, the clouds, the cry of the children, a background noise dripping with melancholy. After the darkness there may be light, but the darkness remanis.
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hard to get [h]old of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2014
hard to get [h]old of
interesting, but needs split up into paragraphs. bit of a blob the way it's set out and likely to stop people from reading more, which would be a pity.
Read full commentPosted in No Man's land
Don't know why your shorten
Posted on Sun, 10 Aug 2014
Don't know why your shorten until to the more colloquial 'til in the last paragraph, a sudden colluquialism that doesn't quite gell.
Verm imaginative. I couldn't get grey man, but blue man, well, that set the tone.
Read full commentPosted in Shredding
humble and sad, but never bad
Posted on Sat, 09 Aug 2014
humble and sad, but never bad.
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I'm excited about what's
Posted on Sun, 03 Aug 2014
I'm excited about what's about to happen too.
Read full commentPosted in Out of Control-5
psalms [palms of hands]
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
psalms [palms of hands]
type out a candlestick
don;t don't
plenty or rain today and I know how the narrator feels.
Read full commentPosted in A late summers day
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