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Is it fun being impossibly young? Am I too old to care What you wear? What I wear Without a care? T-shirts, chains, all a dazzle. Soulboys’ greasy...

In Closing

Years roll down your face – historic Hysterical Pack a paunch to your gut A hundred billion neurons die Now you know why Diet You what-the-fuck...
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Story of the week

10 Near Death Experiences (but there's only 5 NDEs because I'm still alive).

Ten near-death experiences. I don’t remember this NDE, but I’ve got reliable witnesses lined up to testify, although not on me, that it’s true. I was...
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Ambush

If you don’t get by Don’t ask why Maybe next year Shift your feet Move on Can’t you see? Work harder Become like me Cleanse the dust Sunny side up...
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fix you 3

Back at base, doors scanned and measured Inspector Allan’s approach and let him through. Office walls ebbed and flowed and doubled as free-floating...

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1794 of my comments have received 1839 Great Feedback votes

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yeh, shades of snow and ice

Posted on Mon, 18 Dec 2017

yeh, shades of snow and ice and all things nice, but a message too, not long for you. 

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Posted in The Snownan.

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nice eyes don't grow old they

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

nice eyes don't grow old they just lose a bit of twinkle.

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Posted in You had such nice eyes

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where are our friends,.

Posted on Wed, 06 Dec 2017

where are our friends,. indeed? 

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Posted in Touch Me Not

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nicely done. grown-ups are

Posted on Sat, 11 Nov 2017

nicely done. grown-ups are weird. That's why I refuse to grow up. 

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Posted in Poppy

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nice rhyme for halloween is

Posted on Mon, 30 Oct 2017

nice rhyme for halloween is ghostly time. 

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Posted in All Hallow’s Day

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I guess with hpyerbole and

Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017

I guess with hpyerbole and hyperreality sometimes we forget we're not always right. 

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Posted in Indifferent

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the sun brings its own

Posted on Thu, 26 Oct 2017

the sun brings its own medicine and this seems ancient and modern. The phrase, 'for wounded, beyond make mend' is slightly clumsy. I know what you mean, but simpler with 'beyond mend'. 

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Posted in Broken

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trays were our sleighs

Posted on Thu, 12 Oct 2017

trays were our sleighs

puss-in-boot style boots [too many boots. reword eg footware. 

I'm not sure faces would be little, when you're little.  Take out the uncertainties. eg, [perhaps with] a little ethnic design. 

two-and-a-...

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Posted in Yellow Ribbons

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the girls ruptured nose [girl

Posted on Sat, 30 Sep 2017

the girls ruptured nose [girl's]

 her left leg juddered in a spasm, then with a slow exhale,

the pretty girl died. [formatting error here, but perhaps not in your text]

wonderful scene setting and writing. 

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Posted in The girl with the Maroon lipstick (excerpt from Eagles Hunt Wolves)

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stolent moments can be sweet.

Posted on Wed, 20 Sep 2017

stolent moments can be sweet. 

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Posted in The Journey

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