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Is it fun being impossibly young? Am I too old to care What you wear? What I wear Without a care? T-shirts, chains, all a dazzle. Soulboys’ greasy...
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In Closing
Years roll down your face – historic Hysterical Pack a paunch to your gut A hundred billion neurons die Now you know why Diet You what-the-fuck...
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10 Near Death Experiences (but there's only 5 NDEs because I'm still alive).
Ten near-death experiences. I don’t remember this NDE, but I’ve got reliable witnesses lined up to testify, although not on me, that it’s true. I was...
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Ambush
If you don’t get by Don’t ask why Maybe next year Shift your feet Move on Can’t you see? Work harder Become like me Cleanse the dust Sunny side up...
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fix you 3
Back at base, doors scanned and measured Inspector Allan’s approach and let him through. Office walls ebbed and flowed and doubled as free-floating...
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good luck with this ladylily.
Posted on Sun, 31 Jul 2016
good luck with this ladylily.
Read full commentPosted in Bermondsey to Basra Battlefronts.
I'm a bit dense too seashore.
Posted on Sun, 24 Jul 2016
I'm a bit dense too seashore. clumsy, a form of justification, almost a cliche, a throwway liine that comes before, Allahu Akbar and throws away lives. I've actually convinced myself that's what I meant, whiich is quite impressive for me.
Read full commentPosted in Tribe
gets you on the rebound.
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
gets you on the rebound. There's a jump in the point of view from the narrator to that of the dogs watching him, in the first parargraph. It's a forecful imaged. Just meat. But incongrouus.
Read full commentPosted in Dogs
Brilliant, but you gallop to
Posted on Thu, 07 Jul 2016
Brilliant, but you gallop to the ending.
Read full commentPosted in Flowers (Part Two of Two) (IP)
we're all weak and fragile.
Posted on Wed, 29 Jun 2016
we're all weak and fragile. That is our strength.
Read full commentPosted in OverPowered
I'm not even as simple as I
Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2016
I'm not even as simple as I think.
Read full commentPosted in Outery (Salt of the Earth)
if life is a classroom I'm in
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2016
if life is a classroom I'm in the wrong school.
Read full commentPosted in Classroom
in a circle, in a cycle, a
Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016
in a circle, in a cycle, a controlled storm of writing.
Read full commentPosted in The First Step
this is good, really good,
Posted on Wed, 15 Jun 2016
this is good, really good, but could be far better if you broke the three seperate narratives into seperate storylines of six, thirteen and eighteen. Slow down time. It's got an edge about it, which I like.
Read full commentPosted in I didn't want to do it
The movement and moments of
Posted on Tue, 14 Jun 2016
The movement and moments of silence and complicity make a sweet kind of electiricity.
Read full commentPosted in Something Dead In The Road
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