Kimmie’s cat’s-eyes makeup was smudged. She hopped and skipped in front of Angel in a pale blue, zip-up hooded top and gripped the top of her denims...
‘Sorry, I was delayed,’ said Angel as she stepped into the car and pulled her seatbelt on. She sniffed and turned her head away, looking back at the...
The living room door was open. ‘Can I have a word, m’lady?’ Karen leaned sideways in her armchair, almost knocking over an overflowing glass ashtray...
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I'm a reader that writes
Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021
I'm a reader that writes stuff nobody much reads. I've written a couple of longer, novel sized stories. One, in particular, I think is good and should be published. Sometimes I send it off. But I don't expect it to be publsihed. I don't really...
funny thing memory, who we are and who we are not. Dad and not dad. I'd the same thing with my mother. Mum and not Mum. When she died I said I was delighted. People might have taken that the wrong way, but not Mum had no life.
I'm a reader that writes
Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021
I'm a reader that writes stuff nobody much reads. I've written a couple of longer, novel sized stories. One, in particular, I think is good and should be published. Sometimes I send it off. But I don't expect it to be publsihed. I don't really...
Read full commentPosted in On Giving Up
Pie-charts never add up. if
Posted on Fri, 03 Sep 2021
Pie-charts never add up. if you index-link they sink. as pictograms, chewy as...yeh, great way to spend more than a day.
Read full commentPosted in Pie Chart Man
twenty-years old [hyphen, I
Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021
twenty-years old [hyphen, I think]
beat-up dog.
could only have dreamt (delete 'of')
Whilst we couldn't ever remember meeting there, we got on from the first second (delete 'we met')
quiite a view from the summit....
Read full commentPosted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)
funny thing memory, who we
Posted on Fri, 27 Aug 2021
funny thing memory, who we are and who we are not. Dad and not dad. I'd the same thing with my mother. Mum and not Mum. When she died I said I was delighted. People might have taken that the wrong way, but not Mum had no life.
Read full commentPosted in A Home Coming
I wonder if kids will know
Posted on Mon, 23 Aug 2021
I wonder if kids will know what SWALK is? but you certainly do. SWALK to you too. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Love Letters From The Past S.W.A.L.K.
good stuff. I was wating for
Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021
good stuff. I was wating for Cole to turn up. As a seasoned reader of chimes, I knew he would.
Read full commentPosted in Wind Chimes on the Boardwalk
nicely done.
Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021
nicely done.
Read full commentPosted in Sleepy Time
good stuff mate, now if the
Posted on Thu, 19 Aug 2021
good stuff mate, now if the kids had been armed with slippers there would have been no stopping them.
Read full commentPosted in Minefield
yeh, we see each other, but
Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021
yeh, we see each other, but rarely outself. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Leaving Home
great story,
Posted on Wed, 11 Aug 2021
great story,
Read full commentPosted in Danger Mouse
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