A humbling poem Rhiannon, makes you realize just what is really important. I think as you get older appreciation turns to peace and calm and not so much to constantly wanting more.
You have weaved your words perfectly in this poem Paul, creating with care a wriiten tribute to the coming Equinox. The dominion of the sun will soon become stronger and longer days of light will return.
Wonderful poem penny. I could relate to so much in your words. It's wonderful to be able to explore our imaginations and dreams...where would we be without them? I also like the rhyming in your poem, it sets it off nicely.
I thought that last line summed up your apocalyptic poem, that even after we're long gone, nature will go on. A poem also describing how small humans actually are in the grand scheme of survival.
Congrats on reaching that
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
Congrats on reaching that milestone of 55 years together Luigi. I enjoyed your poem too.
Jenny. xx
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I so enjoyed reading Penny,
Posted on Sat, 20 Mar 2021
I so enjoyed reading Penny, and I like that you left it on a cliff hanger...so I look forward to reading more.
Jenny.
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A humbling poem Rhiannon,
Posted on Thu, 18 Mar 2021
A humbling poem Rhiannon, makes you realize just what is really important. I think as you get older appreciation turns to peace and calm and not so much to constantly wanting more.
Enjoyable read.
Jenny.
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Posted on Wed, 17 Mar 2021
Loved your story Penny and you were spot on with Willows manners, was it based on your own cat?
I also like the concept of a familiar...original idea.
Jenny.
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You have weaved your words
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
You have weaved your words perfectly in this poem Paul, creating with care a wriiten tribute to the coming Equinox. The dominion of the sun will soon become stronger and longer days of light will return.
Beautifully mastered.
Jenny...
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Wonderful poem penny. I could
Posted on Tue, 16 Mar 2021
Wonderful poem penny. I could relate to so much in your words. It's wonderful to be able to explore our imaginations and dreams...where would we be without them? I also like the rhyming in your poem, it sets it off nicely.
Jenny.
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Hello Di,
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Hello Di,
there's no way you are thick at all. This was just a bit of fantasy talk.
It means the prisoner escaped at night and crept into some bushes to sleep not really knowing where they are. When the prisoner awakes and creeps...
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Some great rhythm and rhyme
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Some great rhythm and rhyme in each stanza of this poem Luigi.
It's amazing when there's a need to achieve great heights, the determination some humans will go to when faced with obstacles.
I always think of people with...
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Some wonderful descriptions
Posted on Sun, 14 Mar 2021
Some wonderful descriptions of the wind in this poem Richard. Especially loved,
At times it may
provide
a soft caress
as when lovers meet.
Enjoyed reading.
Jenny.
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I thought that last line
Posted on Fri, 12 Mar 2021
I thought that last line summed up your apocalyptic poem, that even after we're long gone, nature will go on. A poem also describing how small humans actually are in the grand scheme of survival.
Inspiring and made me think Hilary.
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