Hi paul, you paint with words such a mystical scene that draws the reader in straight away. I love how you capture the essence of this place. Truely stunning.
How sad for these two who were once betrothed. Your story is taking me on this incredible journey with Aefelthrith and Gwladys that's full of adventure and humour too.
Sadly an all too familiar story. It reminded me of when I walked out of the martial home for the last time. It's the only way to survive when a relationship breaks down.
It's obvious you worked hard on this story, especially this part with its intricate explanation of the calendars. So I see now the truth is becoming clearer.
Great read as always and well deserved of the cherries, congrats to you.
Oooh! Please don't end this
Posted on Tue, 09 Feb 2021
Oooh! Please don't end this story too soon. It gets better and better. I'm totally addicted.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Though She With Giants Fight! - Episode 12
Hi paul, you paint with words
Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2021
Hi paul, you paint with words such a mystical scene that draws the reader in straight away. I love how you capture the essence of this place. Truely stunning.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Mehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden)
I'm not going to second guess
Posted on Sun, 07 Feb 2021
I'm not going to second guess at who grabbed Aefelthrith, but I'm looking forward to finding out.
A real page turner.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in No Foes Shall Stay Her Might! - Episode 11
Hi Paul,
Posted on Fri, 05 Feb 2021
Hi Paul,
I just wanted to let you know I read this with great interest.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Theory of Everything (take 2)
How sad for these two who
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
How sad for these two who were once betrothed. Your story is taking me on this incredible journey with Aefelthrith and Gwladys that's full of adventure and humour too.
So glad to be following.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Follow The Master? - Episode 10
I felt the words in your poem
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
I felt the words in your poem Penny. The rain falling and trees touched by the force of nature. You captured the scene perfectly.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Rain in a Forest
Sadly an all too familiar
Posted on Sat, 06 Feb 2021
Sadly an all too familiar story. It reminded me of when I walked out of the martial home for the last time. It's the only way to survive when a relationship breaks down.
Well told.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Broken wings still fly
So their journey continues.
Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2021
So their journey continues. The dialogue is spot on and really sets the scene. Still very much enjoying.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Do But Themselves Confound - Episode 8
It's obvious you worked hard
Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2021
It's obvious you worked hard on this story, especially this part with its intricate explanation of the calendars. So I see now the truth is becoming clearer.
Great read as always and well deserved of the cherries, congrats to you.
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Good morning Di,
Posted on Sat, 30 Jan 2021
Good morning Di,
I like that you found those words musical, it must have been while listening to Pentangle.
The line untamed routes was about the time me and my partner went off route in the forest and I got stuck in some thorns and...
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