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What happened, little car?
“Little car, little car, have you been far? have you been far?” ‘They drove me off and made me go fast and then just kept going, I was drained at...
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Meeting the King
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … dressed in a clean outfit … all your past that’s wrong must be wiped clean, and gain new attitude of heart where selfishness has been.
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Night Help
Slowly, silently, the lamplight falls here and there as the farmer strolls back from the barn where the soft beams lit the struggles as ewe and man...
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Working together
[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Youth with strength and fresh new vision, ready, speedy hands and feet. Those grown older, tired and slower cannot with their speed compete. …
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Digging up dirt
Many gladly dig, revealing others’ sins, their own concealing; don’t consider pressures past trivialising sins which now leave all aghast. But now,...
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I remember my husband's uncle
Posted on Thu, 10 Mar 2022
I remember my husband's uncle ostentaeously offernig me to choose something from his mother's jewellery after the funeral. I had never liked or been attracted to jewels, preferring plain things made of slate or copper, or flowers I think. He was...
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Would have been lovely to see
Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022
Would have been lovely to see her needlework! I suspect she would be very careful and quite a perfectionist especially as she was meeting with the specialists.
Somehow those weddings seem to have the money to take the opulance in their...
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I felt that I could feel the
Posted on Tue, 08 Mar 2022
I felt that I could feel the vigorous battering and sharp temperatures freshening my face and pushing me along with you! I liked the reference to 'vacant high ground' , and the hillforts up there.. I wasn't sure of the meaning of the last two...
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Large and complex family,
Posted on Wed, 02 Mar 2022
Large and complex family, especially by her age. I suppose in meeting so many that one hasn't met before or for a long time at a wedding, and if she has a willingness to listen and try to understand, there will be so many complex and distressing...
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the use of consonant
Posted on Thu, 03 Mar 2022
the use of consonant alliteration makes the scene more vivid eg denim dampened,, Blinking bikelamps, Swishing spray, and Gutters gleam with streetlit rain where the near-rhyme helps too. Rhiannon
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Vivid memories to enjoy and
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
Vivid memories to enjoy and share. Rhiannon (I hadn't heard of the hotento fig, but looked it up!)
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An interesting vignette of
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
An interesting vignette of the time again. Rhiannon
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And then the quiet of home …!
Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022
And then the quiet of home …! Very descriptive of being out in the wild winds. We hear of them more in Scotland than down south, don't we? Rhiannon
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You have a very smooth
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
You have a very smooth narrative telling flow, and ease of description. When I first read, I did wonderif it was partly autobiographical, but something didn't seem quite so, but it must have been quite a challenge to try to imagine the feelings...
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Glad you were all OK, Jenny.
Posted on Fri, 18 Feb 2022
Glad you were all OK, Jenny. Sorry about the devastation. As you say it can happen so quickly, but I'm glad you are finding a fairly tranquil sky later. Rhiannon
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