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I really enjoyed reading this

Posted on Tue, 30 Oct 2018

I really enjoyed reading this because off the brilliant descriptive prose.it also was making me think on different levels clearly the literate short story as it stands then is almost like a bit of george orwell inspired making me think socio...

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Posted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (1)

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I liked reading this it

Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018

I liked reading this it reminded me a bit of the same kind of style and structure of the last piece of yours I read. It works really well and here you keep my interest throughout. This kind of writing I think my favourite genres " social reality...

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Yh, ralph this poem is pure

Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018

Yh, ralph this poem is pure real I mean mate you have written a pure blinder here. It pretty much stops me and silences me. There is so much here.

I am going to come back to this and try and really look from different view points but on...

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Posted in Last Rites

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I like the rythm in this. Is

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

I like the rythm in this. Is like what I would call a social reality poem in my genre defined tick list. Kl.

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Posted in All I Ever Got

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Hi andy sorry I not get back

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

Hi andy sorry I not get back sooner. Eh, the collabaration on a project sounds quite an interesting idea. Are you talking about film ? I think that writers working together on projects creates a whole new creative dynamics so yh I mean what kind...

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Andy as I mentioned I am

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

Andy as I mentioned I am about to begin writing a feature film script and would like to use your poem in the script if you give me permission. When I complete script I have plans to try and move the project forward. Its a long shot but well...

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Posted in Boudicca

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Cool andy.

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

Cool andy.

I love this and the ending

to be born born born reborn again.

Pure passion in this poem.

Keep writing.

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Boudiccia !

Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018

Boudiccia !

Thas what came to mind reading this. I was thinking of a writing premise recently based on boudiccia, ( I hope I have spelt her name correctdly ) and your poem fits neatly in.

Nice.

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Really good poem.

Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018

Really good poem.

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Posted in WHERE DO YOUNG MEN GO

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I liked this. I thought the

Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018

I liked this. I thought the heading caught me and then started reading, the early bit catch if you want was really cool and works brilliantly like I wanted to know about the movement of a jam. You capture it really well structured to. I feel this...

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