I have 13 stories published in
0 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 6202 times
and 15 of my stories have been cherry picked. 62 of my 246 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 67 votes
“How long was I dead for ?”, I asked Jason the male nurse as he checked the chart hanging at the end of my metal framed bed. A minute, two minutes, I...
We walk through the park, holding hands, out of habit. Together. Apart. The November air has that kind of stillness you only get in autumn. Not just...
62 of my comments have received 67 Great Feedback votes
1 Vote
Thanks for your time Jenny.
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2026
Thanks for your time Jenny. I don't know if you have ever read Angela Carter's short story 'The Company of Wolves', or seen the film of the same name, but it is her typically gothic take on the Red Riding Hood story. I would recommend both of...
What a poignant story Turlough, with your trademark gentle humour. And what a spooky coincidence you were writing it when he, unexpectedly by the public anyway, should have passed away.
I agree about his music, I hate 'Driving Home for...
This is hilarious ! I do so hope Tommy can jump through all the legal hoops in time and get his drone, water pistol and growly bear delivered for Christmas Day.
The contents are obviously different, but it reminds me of the letters sent...
Thanks for your time Jenny.
Posted on Sat, 03 Jan 2026
Thanks for your time Jenny. I don't know if you have ever read Angela Carter's short story 'The Company of Wolves', or seen the film of the same name, but it is her typically gothic take on the Red Riding Hood story. I would recommend both of...
Read full commentPosted in Sleeping Beauty
Amazing Grace
Posted on Wed, 31 Dec 2025
Very pleased to see Amazing Grace make a reappearance, she sounds like a lady who liked a NYE party !
Chestita Nova Godina to you and Priyatelkata.
So as not to miss my last opportunity of 2025 to send a comment thread off at a...
Read full commentPosted in On the Patch Where the Strawberries Grew
Time Travel
Posted on Sat, 27 Dec 2025
Hi Beanzie
In chapter 1 Ginny says this to Timmy : babe, you’re fifty two, it ain’t gonna happen
But in chapter 3 above it says : me a man in his forties wondering what had happened
Timmy seems to be going backwards in time...
Read full commentPosted in My Dinosaur Era Chapter 3 *Rewrite*
Dickens
Posted on Wed, 24 Dec 2025
It feels sort of Dickensian to me, I think it's the names and the dynamic between them. With Archibald as Sam Weller and Josiah as Mr Pickwick.
Read full commentPosted in Christmas Mrs.
I loved the dialogue between
Posted on Wed, 24 Dec 2025
I loved the dialogue between Josiah and Archibald ! Very clever and very funny.
Read full commentPosted in Christmas Mrs.
What a poignant story
Posted on Tue, 23 Dec 2025
What a poignant story Turlough, with your trademark gentle humour. And what a spooky coincidence you were writing it when he, unexpectedly by the public anyway, should have passed away.
I agree about his music, I hate 'Driving Home for...
Read full commentPosted in Driving Home for Chris
This is hilarious ! I do so
Posted on Sun, 21 Dec 2025
This is hilarious ! I do so hope Tommy can jump through all the legal hoops in time and get his drone, water pistol and growly bear delivered for Christmas Day.
The contents are obviously different, but it reminds me of the letters sent...
Read full commentPosted in Letter from Frankincense & Myrrh, Solicitors
And jolly well deserved too.
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2025
And jolly well deserved too.
Read full commentPosted in A Hare's Breath 5 - The Dark Hedges
Blimey I wasn't expecting
Posted on Sat, 13 Dec 2025
Blimey I wasn't expecting that.
I'd like to thank my mom, my dog .. and all my lovely friends at ABC !
Read full commentPosted in Elaine
Just had this reply from the
Posted on Wed, 17 Dec 2025
Just had this reply from the ranger Kieren :
"Not too many Beech trees around as they aren’t really the right tree for the Waterpark landscape (they don't like wet feet!) "
But he told me where there are a few so if it ever stops...
Read full commentPosted in A Hare's Breath 5 - The Dark Hedges
Pages