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Just for a short while when shrinking under heat of raging sun, to see snow would be a great relief, contrasted with last dregs of autumn rain, just...
When tempests batter Down your door, Thieves of pain skulk In secret corners, Their chains rattling Deepest anxieties, Dig deep down To those roots,...
when I was going through the menapause, I was working in a factory. I would get so embarrassed because my face would flush bright red when I got nervous, or if someone came over and spoke to me I would have no control. So my only...
It sounds like you had an invigorating walk. The scenery looked so inviting with those black mountains in the distant east. The frisky lambs must have been a pleasure to come across too.
we live in a crazy technological world that I myself cannot grasp, so I really feel for you. I always have to give my partner's mobile phone number for any deliverys or information as I don't have a mobile phone. I know it...
Now I wonder what's coming next in Cheshire for Josiah and Archibald! A new adventure for our intrepid twosome who are always ready for another undertaking! If you'll pardon the pun. ...
Poor Vanessa, Annie is dynamic, which makes the story so real. It's so true to life, because I remember when I was young and how returning from travels abroad I'd be full of enthusiasm and wishing my parents would travel more. I have to say I do...
I found this poem so moving
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024
I found this poem so moving and a personal reminder of the gradual fading of ones memory in old age, not so much of the past, but of the here and now.
Some astute woven metaphors add to the vividness too.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Son of My Father
Your scenic walk has so much
Posted on Thu, 04 Apr 2024
Your scenic walk has so much to offer the reader Rhiannon, with the malvern hills and those excited lambs with their yews.
I could even smell the fresh country air as i read and it gave me a smile.
Breathtaking as always.
...
Read full commentPosted in Above Peterchurch, east of the Black Mountains
As always Phil, your
Posted on Fri, 29 Mar 2024
As always Phil, your characters spring from the page with their distinctive traits that you've created.
Enjoyed as always.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Footloose ('Dead Reckoning' series - Part 4)
Hi Jane,
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Hi Jane,
when I was going through the menapause, I was working in a factory. I would get so embarrassed because my face would flush bright red when I got nervous, or if someone came over and spoke to me I would have no control. So my only...
Read full commentPosted in Erazofuge
It sounds like you had an
Posted on Tue, 26 Mar 2024
It sounds like you had an invigorating walk. The scenery looked so inviting with those black mountains in the distant east. The frisky lambs must have been a pleasure to come across too.
Lovely to read and imagine being there too.
...
Read full commentPosted in Above Pencombe, a cold day
Hi Maxine,
Posted on Sat, 23 Mar 2024
Hi Maxine,
we live in a crazy technological world that I myself cannot grasp, so I really feel for you. I always have to give my partner's mobile phone number for any deliverys or information as I don't have a mobile phone. I know it...
Read full commentPosted in When Did Our World Become SO Complicated?
Now I wonder what's coming
Posted on Fri, 22 Mar 2024
Now I wonder what's coming next in Cheshire for Josiah and Archibald! A new adventure for our intrepid twosome who are always ready for another undertaking! If you'll pardon the pun. ...
Read full commentPosted in I Shot the Sheriff ('Dead Reckoning' series - Part 3)
Hello William,
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Hello William,
this is such kind feedback and a true honour to receive. It's always nice to connect with readers and know a poem has worked.
So much gratitude for your kind words and many thanks.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in What's Not Written
Poor Vanessa, Annie is
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Poor Vanessa, Annie is dynamic, which makes the story so real. It's so true to life, because I remember when I was young and how returning from travels abroad I'd be full of enthusiasm and wishing my parents would travel more. I have to say I do...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 22
Mysterious is the silver moon
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Mysterious is the silver moon. You bring her to life with this slightly heartbreaking but beautifully crafted poem Paul.
Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in The Moon Maiden
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