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520 of my comments have received 540 Great Feedback votes

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Jammin'

Posted on Fri, 10 Sep 2021

This describes just about every night in our house at this time of year. We have a garden full of fruit trees and bushes and my missus is obsessed with not wasting any even though she can only scratch the surface of our lovely problem.

We...

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Posted in preserving time

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This is great!

Posted on Thu, 09 Sep 2021

This is great!

It saddens me that kids at school can be lablelled as trouble makers even if they are not but simply because they don't meet academic expectations. Your poem really demonstrates how we are all able to achieve something and...

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Autumn

Posted on Tue, 07 Sep 2021

This is a really good piece of poetry Jenny.

You have really captured the atmosphere of autumn in the way that I see it. People who are less fearful than I of the darkening at the year's end tell me that I should enjoy the colours and...

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Posted in Yin And Yang Of Autumn Forest

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I really like this.

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

I really like this.

I particularly like your description of what happens when you open the window. Sometimes it does feel that by opening a window the whole of what is going on outside drifts in to stir up the stillness and change the...

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Posted in Trees Called To Me

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Sad words

Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021

I love how you have expressed so much sadness with just a few words. The saddest word amongst them is 'happy'.

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Posted in flotsam and jetsam

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Excellent imagary

Posted on Wed, 01 Sep 2021

Your poem contains some excellent imagery and a sleepless situation I can relate to myself.

I particularly liked ...

'the calloused mattress
its lumps and humps
promises to keep my secrets
under the spell of fitted...

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Posted in Bedtime Blues

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Nice work

Posted on Thu, 02 Sep 2021

I enjoyed reading this. A reminder that everything in nature is unique and lasts only seconds as light and weather conditions change and time and seasons advance. 

'Waste not the precious light' ... we forget just how...

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Posted in I See Something Special

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Thank you very much!

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Thank you for reading my poem and for your kind comment.

I'm not completely certain that it does get too hot for bees. It was just too hot for me to go and see what the bees were doing so I made a wild assumption in the interests of saving...

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Posted in A Hot Afternoon in Malki Chiflik

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I don't share this fact with

Posted on Sun, 29 Aug 2021

I don't share this fact with many people but I spend a lot of my time sitting outdoors staring at the sky. Days with blue skies and cumulus clouds are the best because this is when I see maps of Ireland, ducks with three legs, my grandfather...

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Posted in Going With The Flow

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An enjoyable read.

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

Your story captured my imagination from the outset as I know from my own experience that the trials of trying to live day to day in a new country and learn the language at the same time can be at times gruelling. I retired to Bulgaria where...

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