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| Type | Title | Author | Replies | Last updated |
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| Story | A Dream Team | luigi_pagano | 2 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Wind Chimes on the Boardwalk | Penny4athought | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Here Is the News | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Virtual Readings | luigi_pagano | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Back to Square One | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Forum topic | Duplicate entries | luigi_pagano | 0 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | The Medium is the Message | luigi_pagano | 2 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Writing in the Sand | Tom Brown | 16 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Fleeting Observations Of A Poet | skinner_jennifer | 26 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | An Ill Wind | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | For Argument's Sake | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Gold, Silver and Bronze | luigi_pagano | 18 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | Heading South | forest_for_ever | 5 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | A Waiting List | luigi_pagano | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Story | The Desert Fox | luigi_pagano | 8 | 4 years 3 months ago |
| Forum topic | Calling All You Literary Types | styx | 3 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | A Subtle Distinction | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | The Devil's Bones | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Pistols at Dawn | luigi_pagano | 12 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Blind Date | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Sanctuary | Elegantfowl | 17 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Food of Love | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | Penalties | marandina | 15 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | A Flag of Convenience | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 4 months ago |
| Story | No Cream in the Carbonara | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 4 months ago |







A very sweet and cheerful
Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020
A very sweet and cheerful poem, Niamh. Much enjoyed, thanks.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in Spencer
A clever and bold opening
Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020
A clever and bold opening line to a poem which weaves beautiful imagery into lyrical verse. The analogy, unless I am much mistaken, may have been inspired by Hans Holbein's painting “A Lady with a Squirrel and a Starling” which some people now...
Read full commentPosted in Starling
Poem of the Week. I had no
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
Poem of the Week. I had no doubt. Huge congratulations.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in Deimos
Your kind appraisal is heart
Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020
Your kind appraisal is heart warming, Rachel, and a boost to my morale.
Read full commentI started experimenting with flash fiction on a website called Droubbles.com which might be defunct now.
We were required to write a story in 200 words. I got...
Posted in Three is a Crowd
Perfection itself. Luigi x
Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020
Perfection itself.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in Deimos
Another feather in your cap,
Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020
Another feather in your cap, Rachel. Not only you are a magnificent poet, your dulcet tones are captivating. Brava.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in Meditation
Exceptional writing as ever,
Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020
Exceptional writing as ever, Rachel. Just a tiny typo in the second line: should be 'in perigee'.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in Worm Moon
An interesting read, Drew,
Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020
An interesting read, Drew, that reawakened my nostalgic memory of the time when I put an order through for a Sinclair ZX80 and be told - what joy! - that I could have an updated version (the ZX81) for the same price. It had a 1k memory, if I...
Read full commentPosted in On the Spectrum
I find villanelle and pantoum
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
I find villanelle and pantoum very difficult and I tend to steer clear of these forms, Niamh.
Read full commentAlthough they can be technically correct by following the rules, the poetic element doesn't always match the effort.
Dylan Thomas' "Do not...
Posted in Toothache
Drew, for information.
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
Drew, for information.
The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the...
Read full commentPosted in Toothache
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