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A Thought

How can anyone achieve happiness?
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Cherry

A Devil of a Man (7) - In Vino Veritas

Tasting the local wine. - (Image from Wikimedia Commons - Diego Delso, delso.photo , License " CC-BY-SA "
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A Devil of a Man (6) - A Pope's Dilemma

Enters the Green Count - Image by Odejea - Own work, CC BY-SA 3.0,- Wikimedia Commons
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A Devil of a Man (5) - A Fair Exchange

Fair exchange is no robbery. - Image from Wikimedia Commons.
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333 of my comments have received 341 Great Feedback votes

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A very sweet and cheerful

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020

A very sweet and cheerful poem, Niamh. Much enjoyed, thanks.

Luigi x 

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Posted in Spencer

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A clever and bold opening

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020

A clever and bold opening line to a poem which weaves beautiful imagery into lyrical verse. The analogy, unless I am much mistaken, may have been inspired by Hans Holbein's painting “A Lady with a Squirrel and a Starling” which some people now...

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Posted in Starling

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Poem of the Week. I had no

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Poem of the Week. I had no doubt. Huge congratulations.

Luigi x

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Posted in Deimos

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Your kind appraisal is heart

Posted on Wed, 25 Mar 2020

Your kind appraisal is heart warming, Rachel, and a boost to my morale.
I started experimenting with flash fiction on a website called Droubbles.com which might be defunct now.
We were required to write a story in 200 words. I got...

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Posted in Three is a Crowd

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Perfection itself. Luigi x  

Posted on Sun, 22 Mar 2020

Perfection itself.

Luigi x

 

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Posted in Deimos

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Another feather in your cap,

Posted on Sat, 14 Mar 2020

Another feather in your cap, Rachel. Not only you are a magnificent poet, your dulcet tones are captivating. Brava.

Luigi x

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Posted in Meditation

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Exceptional writing as ever,

Posted on Sat, 07 Mar 2020

Exceptional writing as ever, Rachel. Just a tiny typo in the second line: should be 'in perigee'.

Luigi x

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Posted in Worm Moon

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An interesting read, Drew,

Posted on Mon, 02 Mar 2020

An interesting read, Drew, that reawakened my nostalgic memory of the time when I put an order through for a Sinclair ZX80 and be told - what joy! - that I could have an updated version (the ZX81) for the same price. It had a 1k memory, if I...

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Posted in On the Spectrum

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I find villanelle and pantoum

Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020

I find villanelle and pantoum very difficult and I tend to steer clear of these forms, Niamh.
Although they can be technically correct by following the rules, the poetic element doesn't always match the effort.
Dylan Thomas' "Do not...

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Posted in Toothache

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Drew, for information.

Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020

Drew, for information.

The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the...

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