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Hi, my nameless fellow writer
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019
Hi, my nameless fellow writer,
I have been following your progress and noticed that you have been prolific of late with excellent submissions that I have thoroughly enjoyed.
What I found interesting though was that you were inspired...
It was all in good fun, Di. No one took the contest seriously and everybody had a good time.
In retrospect the introduction of an 'interloper' in our team - even though irregular - might have been to our advantage as his presence may have...
I am speechless. This has proved to be my most fruitful week yet.
I feel privileged to have received this accolade considering the array of talented authors whose work continues to reach the pinnacle on ABC.
My thanks to all who have...
Hello Di
I am glad you enjoyed the story seen by three characters and described from their own particular perspective.
All through history people have interpreted facts and theories according to their beliefs or their own interest and...
I like this original analogy comparing houses to envelopes. Although at first it doesn't look as if they have anything in common, the similarity between the two becomes clearer when we consider what happens within both. The occupants of buildings...
Hello Di. Thanks for the kind words,much appreciated, but basically what I have done is 'borrow' some great lines by great poets to create a new poem with which, in all modesty, I was quite pleased. The Notre Dame fire was the catalyst that made...
A lovely descriptive poem, Di, with the first three lines as an introduction that grabs the readers' attention right away. The verses that follow reveal that something as mundane as a walk to the shops evoke feelings so deep that one can easily...
Hi, my nameless fellow writer
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2019
Hi, my nameless fellow writer,
Read full commentI have been following your progress and noticed that you have been prolific of late with excellent submissions that I have thoroughly enjoyed.
What I found interesting though was that you were inspired...
Posted in Nameless
It was all in good fun, Di.
Posted on Sun, 12 May 2019
It was all in good fun, Di. No one took the contest seriously and everybody had a good time.
Read full commentIn retrospect the introduction of an 'interloper' in our team - even though irregular - might have been to our advantage as his presence may have...
Posted in The Cinderella Team
It was a noble gesture on
Posted on Tue, 14 May 2019
It was a noble gesture on your part, Rhiannon, and you taught a valuable lesson to those girls. Good on you.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in An unsought win
Very topical and relevant, Di
Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019
Very topical and relevant, Di. Well done.
Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in bluebells
I am speechless. This has
Posted on Mon, 06 May 2019
I am speechless. This has proved to be my most fruitful week yet.
Read full commentI feel privileged to have received this accolade considering the array of talented authors whose work continues to reach the pinnacle on ABC.
My thanks to all who have...
Posted in A Roman Triptych - 1) Calpurnia's Story
Hello Di
Posted on Wed, 08 May 2019
Hello Di
Read full commentI am glad you enjoyed the story seen by three characters and described from their own particular perspective.
All through history people have interpreted facts and theories according to their beliefs or their own interest and...
Posted in A Roman Triptych - 3) Artemisia's Story
Wonderful metaphor, Di, and
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019
Wonderful metaphor, Di, and good rhymes and rhythm.
Luigix
Read full commentPosted in rock
I like this original analogy
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
I like this original analogy comparing houses to envelopes. Although at first it doesn't look as if they have anything in common, the similarity between the two becomes clearer when we consider what happens within both. The occupants of buildings...
Read full commentPosted in change of address
Hello Di. Thanks for the kind
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019
Hello Di. Thanks for the kind words,much appreciated, but basically what I have done is 'borrow' some great lines by great poets to create a new poem with which, in all modesty, I was quite pleased. The Notre Dame fire was the catalyst that made...
Read full commentPosted in London's Burning
A lovely descriptive poem, Di
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2019
A lovely descriptive poem, Di, with the first three lines as an introduction that grabs the readers' attention right away. The verses that follow reveal that something as mundane as a walk to the shops evoke feelings so deep that one can easily...
Read full commentPosted in herring gull gallantry
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