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StoryThe Case Of The Disappearing Sock luigi_pagano163 years 10 months ago
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StoryThe Cherry Orchard luigi_pagano23 years 10 months ago
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StoryRegeneration luigi_pagano23 years 10 months ago
StoryHello ABC Tales Error_40453 years 10 months ago
StoryA Portrait in Gouache luigi_pagano63 years 10 months ago
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StoryI Know Nothing luigi_pagano23 years 10 months ago
StoryVivaldi con Brio luigi_pagano43 years 10 months ago
StoryI Am Open To Suggestions luigi_pagano63 years 10 months ago
Story"Could It Be Magic?" Penny4athought43 years 10 months ago
StoryWhen You Jog Down Memory Lane luigi_pagano43 years 10 months ago
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StoryThe Meaning of Life luigi_pagano43 years 10 months ago
StoryCandid Camera luigi_pagano83 years 10 months ago
StoryMasquerade luigi_pagano43 years 10 months ago
StoryShark Eye Shell onemorething83 years 10 months ago
StoryInsecurity luigi_pagano103 years 10 months ago
StoryReady, Steady, Stop luigi_pagano43 years 10 months ago
StoryNautilus onemorething63 years 10 months ago
StoryBetween the Photographs agnosticnun33 years 10 months ago

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Snoopy

Image by Tú Lê Anh from Pixabay
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Cherry

The Wonders of Technology

Image by Gerd Altmann from Pixabay
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What Happened to Carlo?

He left in a hot air balloon.
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The Phone Rings

...as I'm having lunch
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316 of my comments have received 331 Great Feedback votes

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Good use of the language,

Posted on Wed, 27 Mar 2019

Good use of the language, Jane. I like 'orbicular shapes' and the crafty suggestion that Barry Gorringe might rhyme with orange as no other rhymes come readily to mind. I seem to have read that 'door hinge' would be suitable. 
I too was...

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Eight-lines stanzas. I am

Posted on Wed, 13 Mar 2019

Eight-lines stanzas. I am impressed, Jane. I thought the poem very amusing, what with the lippety lippety rabbits and the strange fellow with the brillo fuzz, not forgetting the main protagonists, the whippets. Brilliant.

Best, Luigi...

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Posted in He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)

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You have stuck to the

Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019

You have stuck to the technical brief exceptionally well, Jane. The fact that you were able to cope with the unfortunate situation by composing a little poetic gem is admirable - although small consolation for losing your job.

Best wishes...

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Posted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)

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Your description of the

Posted on Sun, 17 Feb 2019

Your description of the various feelings that looks can generate is spot on, Graham. They can mean love, passion, jealousy and even hostility. The latter attribute reminds me of the sixties when confrontational Teddy Boys used the expression "wot...

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Ed this is excellent. The

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

Ed this is excellent. The third stanza is my favourite but I enjoyed the whole poem.
In my opinion it should be Pick of the Day.

Best, Luigi

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Posted in Blowing Up the Street (IP)

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Oddily enough, Di, this poem

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

Oddly enough, Di, this poem brings to mind the principles of the economic law of diminishing returns: you can invest more and more resources but eventually a saturation point will be reached. It is a meataphor for life itself as your piece...

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Posted in driverless

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I thoroughly agree that it

Posted on Fri, 08 Feb 2019

I thoroughly agree that it wouldn't be a wise move! smiley

Luigi x

P.S...

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Posted in Dandelions

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A great description of this

Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019

A great description of this aristocratic bird, Rhiannon. You always show the environment at its best with style.

Luigi x 

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Posted in Avocet

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A wish list that will be

Posted on Mon, 17 Dec 2018

A wish list that will be familiar to many. An enjoyable read skillfully written.

Best, Luigi x

P.S. Query: a typo on the second line of the final stanza? ...to the the

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Posted in Wish list

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A classy write.  I enjoyed

Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018

A classy write. yes I enjoyed the read. 

Best, Luigi

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