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StoryA sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon Rhiannonw174 years 8 months ago
StoryComing Home luigi_pagano144 years 8 months ago
StoryDaydreamer skinner_jennifer264 years 8 months ago
StoryFluency luigi_pagano64 years 8 months ago
StoryNo Ties (IP) Rhiannonw224 years 8 months ago
StoryWhen We Were Young skinner_jennifer224 years 8 months ago
Storyto bee Di_Hard134 years 8 months ago
StoryThe King of Italy Ewan44 years 8 months ago
StoryThe Martians Have Landed luigi_pagano104 years 8 months ago
StoryEstival Solstice marandina184 years 8 months ago
StoryLangdale Pikes In Winter skinner_jennifer274 years 8 months ago
Story Covid19 Update luigi_pagano24 years 8 months ago
StoryIn The Stillness Of Late Years skinner_jennifer234 years 8 months ago
StorySour Grapes luigi_pagano104 years 8 months ago
StoryHoneysuckle On The Breeze skinner_jennifer124 years 8 months ago
StoryA Heavy Load To Bear luigi_pagano124 years 8 months ago
StoryJealousy luigi_pagano44 years 8 months ago
Story"Photographs & Reflections" Penny4athought104 years 8 months ago
StoryAir on the G String luigi_pagano104 years 9 months ago
StoryElemental Forces luigi_pagano64 years 9 months ago
StoryCarnival in Venice luigi_pagano44 years 9 months ago
StorySymphony Of Emotions skinner_jennifer234 years 9 months ago
StoryMehtab Bagh (Moonlight Garden) marandina234 years 9 months ago
StoryCaged Bird monodemo34 years 9 months ago
StoryA Riot of Colours (edited) luigi_pagano144 years 9 months ago

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Cherry

The Experiment

Trying something new - Image from Pixabay
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Cherry

Lucrezia Borgia

A medieval femme fatale. It was rumoured that Lucrezia was in possession of a hollow ring that she used to poison drinks.(Image fro Wikimedia Commons)
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Cherry

It Could Have Been Me

After Pam Ayres's "I Wish I'd Looked After My Teeth". It is a parody I wrote in 2008 that I hope reflects the jocularity and fun of the original piece - Image from Pixabay
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339 of my comments have received 349 Great Feedback votes

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A very descriptive poem of a

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020

A very descriptive poem of a fierce storm that has caught many unprepared and powerless to do anything except watching the pelting rain on the window panes, with its suggestion of further upheaval, and observe the extensive damage it caused....

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Posted in Blustery Tempest

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Your fecund mind has produced

Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2020

Your fecund mind has produced another memorable poem that shows your knowledge of Nature and how it relates to life.
I am greatly impressed by your masterly use of the language.

Best, Luigi x

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Posted in Worm Rose

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Hi Di. I admire the lyricism

Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2020

Hi Di. I admire the lyricism and inventiveness that you employ in your poetry and your use of metaphors although the line Trees snug in moss onesies threw me as I had no inkling of the meaning of 'onesies' and had to look it up.The...

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Posted in Present

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Hi Di. Talking of cats going

Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020

Hi Di. Talking of cats going missing, prior to Toby I used to have another black and white cat called, what else but Whisky. We had a very long garden which faced a big field and I built a path on which he slowly trundled to the fence at the end...

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Posted in King of the Road

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I am amazed at how your

Posted on Wed, 08 Jan 2020

I am amazed at how your output is consistently excellent, o.m.t.. and envious of your brilliance, I must confess.

My best wishes and congratulations, Luigi.

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Posted in There is hope here

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Like everything else, you

Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2020

Like everything else, you have to learn the technique and there is no danger in looking at the spider through the glass; in fact by keeping it in your sight you will be sure that it hasn't escaped capture in the meantime. As an additional...

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Posted in The Female of the Species (a ryūka)

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A brilliant addition to your

Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020

A brilliant addition to your collection that has a great number of poems which show your appreciation and concern for the natural world.
Well done on Pick of the Week, thoroughly deserved.

Best wishes, Luigi

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Posted in You can’t cling to something once it has gone.

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All Japanese poems are

Posted on Fri, 03 Jan 2020

All Japanese poems are syllabic, Di. There are several forms each containing lines with a variable numbers of syllables. The lantern poem with 1, 2, 3, 4 and 1 is the most minimalist after the haiku, I believe.

Luigi x

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Posted in A Chinese Lantern

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An atmospheric and nostalgic

Posted on Sun, 24 Nov 2019

An atmospheric and nostalgic poem, revealing the affection for a place that is the poet's spiritual home and the yearning that he has to return to his former abode. Enjoyed.

Regards, Luigi.

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Posted in Home

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Hello Di, I much enjoyed your

Posted on Thu, 14 Nov 2019

Hello Di, I much enjoyed your multilayered poem full of real-life images with which we all can relate. 
The reference to toilet rolls made me smile as it brought to mind my latest purchase, a jumbo pack of 18 rolls at basement prices from a...

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