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| Story | Sanctuary | Elegantfowl | 17 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Food of Love | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Penalties | marandina | 15 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | A Flag of Convenience | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | No Cream in the Carbonara | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Poor Mary | skinner_jennifer | 14 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | A sleepy mid-July mid-afternoon | Rhiannonw | 17 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Coming Home | luigi_pagano | 14 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Daydreamer | skinner_jennifer | 26 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | Fluency | luigi_pagano | 6 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | No Ties (IP) | Rhiannonw | 22 | 4 years 6 months ago |
| Story | When We Were Young | skinner_jennifer | 22 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | to bee | Di_Hard | 13 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The King of Italy | Ewan | 4 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | The Martians Have Landed | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Estival Solstice | marandina | 18 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Langdale Pikes In Winter | skinner_jennifer | 27 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Covid19 Update | luigi_pagano | 2 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | In The Stillness Of Late Years | skinner_jennifer | 23 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Sour Grapes | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Honeysuckle On The Breeze | skinner_jennifer | 12 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | A Heavy Load To Bear | luigi_pagano | 12 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Jealousy | luigi_pagano | 4 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | "Photographs & Reflections" | Penny4athought | 10 | 4 years 7 months ago |
| Story | Air on the G String | luigi_pagano | 10 | 4 years 7 months ago |








I find villanelle and pantoum
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
I find villanelle and pantoum very difficult and I tend to steer clear of these forms, Niamh.
Read full commentAlthough they can be technically correct by following the rules, the poetic element doesn't always match the effort.
Dylan Thomas' "Do not...
Posted in Toothache
Drew, for information.
Posted on Wed, 26 Feb 2020
Drew, for information.
The pantoum is a form of poetry similar to a villanelle in that there are repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the...
Read full commentPosted in Toothache
An interesting and absorbing
Posted on Mon, 24 Feb 2020
An interesting and absorbing little crime thriller in verse, Niamh. I found myself following the clues wanting to know what was stolen. I enjoyed the unusual format.
Kind regards, Luigi x
Read full commentPosted in What was stolen?
I saw in the news that a
Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2020
I saw in the news that a young boy, a fan of Manchester United football club, wrote to the Liverpool's manager pleading with him to stop his team winning to give the club he supported a chance.
Read full commentI am tempted to make a similar plea and ask...
Posted in The Fox Hunt
Rachel, this must be the
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2020
Rachel, this must be the apotheosis of your poetry; it can't be surpassed, surely. But, having followed your work closely, I'm certain you are going to prove me wrong. Not only is your use of the language exquisite, your knowledge of Greek...
Read full commentPosted in Looking at Klimt’s Frieze for Beethoven
A very descriptive poem of a
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2020
A very descriptive poem of a fierce storm that has caught many unprepared and powerless to do anything except watching the pelting rain on the window panes, with its suggestion of further upheaval, and observe the extensive damage it caused....
Read full commentPosted in Blustery Tempest
It is more a social comment
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2020
It is more a social comment based on current affairs than a celebration of Valentine's day, which is perhaps not what readers might expect.
Read full commentSometimes I am inspired by headlines to produce a piece, like this one, that could generate a...
Posted in Valentine
Your fecund mind has produced
Posted on Sat, 08 Feb 2020
Your fecund mind has produced another memorable poem that shows your knowledge of Nature and how it relates to life.
I am greatly impressed by your masterly use of the language.
Best, Luigi x
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Hi Di. I admire the lyricism
Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2020
Hi Di. I admire the lyricism and inventiveness that you employ in your poetry and your use of metaphors although the line Trees snug in moss onesies threw me as I had no inkling of the meaning of 'onesies' and had to look it up.The...
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Hi Di. Talking of cats going
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2020
Hi Di. Talking of cats going missing, prior to Toby I used to have another black and white cat called, what else but Whisky. We had a very long garden which faced a big field and I built a path on which he slowly trundled to the fence at the end...
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